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[原创]斑斓的豹
蓝郁
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PostPosted: 2007-11-13 00:11:29    Post subject: [原创]斑斓的豹 Reply with quote
蹄音传递贲张的速度
整个草原跟随着你的节奏
动了起来

远山急剧后退
你健美的奔跑裹挟着绿色的风声
豹啊，光线在你磁力的纹里疯狂旋转
一千个一万个小太阳，燃烧黑暗

这是辽阔的草原
这是一场血性的舞蹈
威力无际无边，穿越厚沉的栅栏
抵达内心

豹啊，我看你率性奔驰
力量之美沉醉我的眼睛
如果能够，随你一起律动
我情愿成为被你追逐的生灵

跑起来，飞起来
我的体内睡着一只斑斓的豹
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2007-11-13 01:17:40    Post subject: Reply with quote
写得激情~问好新朋友！
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莞君
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PostPosted: 2007-11-13 10:18:56    Post subject: Reply with quote
欣赏了 问好
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蓝郁
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PostPosted: 2007-11-13 16:11:48    Post subject: Reply with quote
半溪明月 wrote:
写得激情~问好新朋友！


问候明月。感谢点评~
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hepingdao
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PostPosted: 2007-11-13 16:19:20    Post subject: Reply with quote
很张扬
问好
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蓝郁
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PostPosted: 2007-11-13 16:20:12    Post subject: Reply with quote
莞君 wrote:
欣赏了 问好


问候莞君，祝安！
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-11-13 18:52:37    Post subject: Reply with quote
蹄音传递贲张的速度
整个草原跟随着你的节奏
动了起来


很醒目的开端, 喜欢.
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蓝郁
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PostPosted: 2007-11-13 19:55:17    Post subject: Reply with quote
hepingdao wrote:
很张扬
问好


问候老师。谢回复。
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蓝郁
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PostPosted: 2007-11-13 19:55:59    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
蹄音传递贲张的速度
整个草原跟随着你的节奏
动了起来


很醒目的开端, 喜欢.


问候白水版主。谢鼓励~
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