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推车里的女婴

非马
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Posted: 2007-11-11 08:48:17 Post subject: 推车里的女婴

推车里的女婴在绝壁的悬崖上或虎视眈眈的街口只要是窝都一样舒适安全你看这小鸟笃定宁静── 谁都不忍心告诉她和风的音乐里有危机隆隆逼近自四面八方软帽的荫凉外有越旋越低的鹰 _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界> http://feima.yidian.org/bmz.htm

白水
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Posted: 2007-11-11 08:51:37 Post subject:

张弛之弦提起了一颗悬空的心. 学习了. 问好老师

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-11-12 00:31:17 Post subject:

欣赏非马老师的诗！问好！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-11-12 06:42:39 Post subject:

强烈的对比下的艺术效果。那婴儿笃定的宁静给人很多思考，成人是不是需要这种临危不惧呢？ _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

非马
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Posted: 2007-11-12 07:35:14 Post subject:

问白水,杨海军,杯中冲浪诸位好!谢谢阅评. _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界> http://feima.yidian.org/bmz.htm

莞君
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Posted: 2007-11-13 10:18:16 Post subject:

凝练语言纯熟的诗歌空间上也很开阔提 _________________ 莞君

William Zhou周道模
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Joined: 10 Jun 2007
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Posted: 2007-11-13 15:20:46 Post subject:

非马老师的诗语诗句都定型了啥？我读得多有点这样的感觉，请教了。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

白琳
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Joined: 29 May 2007
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Posted: 2007-11-15 03:16:47 Post subject:

诗不在长,非马老师的短诗我非常欣赏. "只要是窝都一样舒适安全 "好.

莞君
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Posted: 2007-11-15 11:26:18 Post subject:

再欣赏问好 _________________ 莞君

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