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Posted: 2007-11-07 19:44:09 Post subject: 独住Richmonde别墅

独住Richmonde别墅 ——司马策风丁冬。浴缸水珠滑落从史前冰川猛敲额头青铜器金振翅膀扑扇秦砖汉瓦中国梦黑天鹅绒收一帘星云温哥华枫叶鲜红射穿眼瞳醒的梦。蝴蝶轮回梦的醒。蚕蛹 07。11。4 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

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Posted: 2007-11-07 21:13:20 Post subject:

头一节最好:实际生活的情景 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-11-07 22:05:43 Post subject:

司马兄果然在richmond吗？那个richmonde是别墅的名字还是真的在richmond呀？跑来问个好：） 7

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Posted: 2007-11-08 05:10:32 Post subject:

司马断句又太猛了。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2007-11-09 01:11:20 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

头一节最好:实际生活的情景

问好岛主！

一个人独住两层楼别墅，寂静得犹如远古洪荒，一声水珠滴落，打碎

冥思白日梦，于是有了这首小诗。
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Posted: 2007-11-09 01:18:29 Post subject:

七小姐 wrote:

司马兄果然在richmond吗？那个richmonde是别墅的名字还是真的在richmond呀？

跑来问个好：）

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多谢七小姐光临。我住的地方在烈治文靠近渔人码头的地方。一处小别墅，

前后有两个大花园，寂静如空山无人般，简直是参禅悟道的好地方。

问好小姐！
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Posted: 2007-11-09 03:55:18 Post subject:

WOW, 好幸福. 啥时候诗友们上你那吃火锅去

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Posted: 2007-11-09 13:57:10 Post subject:

在哪儿？我们也去住住。 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-11-09 19:14:29 Post subject:

断句依旧的狠~~~ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2007-11-10 03:29:11 Post subject:

风格独特！欣赏！

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Posted: 2007-11-10 06:03:18 Post subject:

把那栋房子卖了，在国内不工作，可以整天写诗歌旅游了～

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杯中冲浪 wrote:

司马断句又太猛了。

老兄法眼厉害别致！不妨指教一二，以免小弟身在庐山。
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Posted: 2007-11-10 20:05:47 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

WOW, 好幸福. 啥时候诗友们上你那吃火锅去 Very Happy

欢迎白水兄！如若到温哥华，定当火锅款待。
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Posted: 2007-11-10 20:08:06 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

在哪儿？我们也去住住。

扬兄光临，棚壁生辉。只要有空来温哥华，自然而然那。
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断句依旧的狠~~~

感谢光临阅评。
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风格独特！欣赏！

感谢子花喜欢赞扬！
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Posted: 2007-11-10 20:11:32 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

把那栋房子卖了，在国内不工作，可以整天写诗歌旅游了～

明月之言高见！感谢阅评。
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Posted: 2007-11-11 04:50:37 Post subject:

欣赏，问好 _________________ 个人主页：http://blog.sina.com.cn/afirewang

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Posted: 2007-11-12 19:06:24 Post subject:

一人独居两楼别墅，真有“庭院深深”之感，难怪会想到“蚕蛹”以及对故土的思念！欣赏！问好！！ _________________ 认为诗是悬崖上的孤松，栖鸟是她唯一的养料我的博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/pengshixue 《网文荟萃》报：http://bbs.wangwenw.com/index.asp

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Posted: 2007-11-13 18:53:42 Post subject:

黑雨滴 wrote:

欣赏，问好

感谢鱼滴光临欣赏.握个!
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