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满庭芳；蝶恋花；琐寒窗；金盏子令；七绝；荷叶铺水面；五律；恨来迟；燕归梁^_^

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Posted: 2007-11-07 03:12:35 Post subject:

荷叶铺水面邀棋共茗，多情不与苔。闲拈菊叶说花开。煮些瘦损话，满座半醺次第呆。朋辞友又来。清汤泛菜梗，蟹脚作弄虾腮。筷子莫迂徊，可取露风餐，清素斋。 _________________

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Posted: 2007-11-09 18:01:33 Post subject:

五律晚霞羞上叶，晨雾淡苍松。花逐亭前水，影随身后峰。恭听无刻句，洗耳有丝钟。蜗角虚怀事，蝉钗实比龙。 _________________

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Posted: 2007-11-09 19:01:08 Post subject:

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偶是老道 wrote:

袖子MM這只盞子怎么比我的小啊？

道理很简单，因为你用的是繁体字，而我用的是简体字^_^

实际上，我写的是《金盏子令》^_^

原來如此，老夫承教：）
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Posted: 2007-11-09 19:04:27 Post subject:

征尘载袖 wrote:

荷叶铺水面
煮些瘦损话，满座半醺次第呆。

這一拍煮得好，老夫呆也。
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Posted: 2007-11-12 16:44:10 Post subject:

老道高寿？ ^_^ _________________

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Posted: 2007-11-12 16:45:54 Post subject:

恨来迟律起青山，韵绕行云，笛取泉溪。复欲掩、陪斟一波眉眼，或说由时。恐化作、烟缕折条枝。这况味、归入无题。没想过、优游笔头遒雅，勘透谁谁。 _________________

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Posted: 2007-11-12 21:30:18 Post subject:

征尘载袖 wrote:

恨来迟

律起青山，韵绕行云，笛取泉溪。
复欲掩、陪斟一波眉眼，或说由时。

恐化作、烟缕折条枝。
这况味、归入无题。
没想过、优游笔头遒雅，勘透谁谁。

MM, 谁谁? 不明白? Embarassed

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Posted: 2007-11-13 07:29:01 Post subject:

袖袖高深,耐人寻味."无题"即有题, "没想过"即"想过","勘透谁谁"? _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2007-11-17 08:33:04 Post subject:

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MM, 谁谁? 不明白? Embarassed

姐姐，这个谁谁是泛指^_^
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Posted: 2007-11-17 08:35:10 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

袖袖高深,耐人寻味."无题"即有题,

"没想过"即"想过","勘透谁谁"?

谢谢黄老师^_^
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Posted: 2007-11-17 08:37:06 Post subject:

燕归梁折得秋香袖里藏，揣甚堪详。秃枝枯萼可知伤？三秋后、半溪凉。无心索句酬孤艳，听琴韵、辨阴阳。画楼遥指苇之杭，说不尽、酒皮囊。 _________________

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Posted: 2007-11-17 13:28:10 Post subject:

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白水 Moonlight wrote:

MM, 谁谁? 不明白? Embarassed

姐姐，这个谁谁是泛指^_^

MM, 我是不明白谁谁在平水韵的发音 Embarassed

因记不住平水韵, 常拿广东话去套, 而广东话谁为"宾果", 这下我就傻了 Razz

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Posted: 2007-11-17 18:45:57 Post subject:

姐姐，在《平水韵》里，溪、题归上平八齐；时、枝、谁归上平四支^_^ _________________

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Posted: 2007-11-17 19:21:10 Post subject:

谢谢MM

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