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八声甘州·畅泳于海
贺兰山下
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PostPosted: 2007-11-03 05:30:59    Post subject: 八声甘州·畅泳于海 Reply with quote

八声甘州·畅泳于海

(十月,适台风过境,云暗海浊,浪高风急,涛声如雷,激越澎湃,沙滩无人,自下水畅泳后持蟹把酒,有感。)

正苍茫天际起洪澜,
渺烟水迷离,
看云涛翻涌,
浊浪澎湃,
白沫狂飞,
沧海横流畅泳,
今舍我其谁?
水击三千里,
不枉男儿!

半世随波浮沉,
惯炎凉风雨,
尽等闲之。
且啸潮头立,
还唱夕阳西。
笑此身,
何日归去?
醉东篱,
对影两忘机。
空山寂,
清风作酒,
明月为诗!

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【韵书】词林正韵
【词谱】钦定词谱
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贺兰山下
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PostPosted: 2007-11-03 06:37:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

当时所拍澎湃激越的浪花



游回时,同伴给我拍下了这张照片

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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2007-11-03 08:56:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

击水三千里,劈波斩浪,惊世骇俗,气势磅礴,

不枉贺兰山下男儿!照片亦堪称上品。
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PostPosted: 2007-11-05 05:07:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢过黄洋界朋友

请大家不吝赐教
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PostPosted: 2007-11-05 06:17:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏,学习,特喜上阙。问好。
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PostPosted: 2007-11-06 21:43:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵,谢谢朋友鼓励
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PostPosted: 2007-11-07 17:12:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

海水澎湃,人有气魄。不错,男儿当如此!
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