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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-11-02 16:50:21    Post subject: Reply with quote
顾小花 wrote:
抓的感觉不错,问候你.


谢谢小花, 很喜欢你的诗歌. Very Happy
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-11-02 16:51:54    Post subject: Reply with quote
彭世学 wrote:
*秋日, 可有闪电?

等
待你出鞘的剑
直到
从幻梦中醒来

云海涨满潮水的浓
我 微笑着
解开缆绳
任一叶孤舟
沉
没

欣赏！提读！！


谢谢鼓励, 问好.
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-11-02 16:54:00    Post subject: Reply with quote
冰夕 wrote:
*秋的箴言

雨在落, 叶
也在落
咸涩的雨水是你未能流尽的泪么?
猜想落叶一定
是没能写完的信了
给谁呢? 未成年的孩子 还是
牵挂你的母亲
只是
记住, 千万不要给他



＊
欣悦珍藏，这动容落叶的未竟之书。


谢谢理解. 这首诗歌是读了一篇报道后的感想吧......

问好冰夕. 喜欢你的诗歌, 有内涵, 语境和语感都很好.
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白琳
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PostPosted: 2007-11-02 17:28:30    Post subject: Reply with quote
问好老乡,喜欢这组短诗,喜欢这种风格,很好.
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新华
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Joined: 29 Jul 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-11-04 16:05:01    Post subject: Reply with quote
等
待你出鞘的剑
直到
从幻梦中醒来

云海涨满潮水的浓
我 微笑着
解开缆绳
任一叶孤舟
沉
没
每一段都让人喜欢......
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