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象湖游

上城
进士出身

Joined: 15 Mar 2007
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Posted: 2007-11-04 04:35:05 Post subject: 象湖游

象湖游[1] 一浪高过一浪让我们紧紧衣裳相互依偎着稍稍不寒冷些飞沫依然亲到脸上 “哗”“哗”“哗” 迎着风我们不得不回去啦背对夕阳我总想看一看后面他是否依然望着我吸引着我的远非你所了解时间的船正在风里冻得发呛你欢欣着那道确定的岸啊！我们已所剩无几而供我挥霍的。。。我只想把它用光早点回去此时此刻我的手紧握着在某一方向他有力地掌控着我 [1]象湖为附近的一个湖。10月12游/占白 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

古井
秀才

Joined: 01 Jun 2007
Posts: 190

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Posted: 2007-11-04 06:40:22 Post subject:

发散的不错，语言稍欠哦~~~·

赵福治
探花

Joined: 30 May 2006
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Posted: 2007-11-05 18:34:50 Post subject:

我的手紧握着在某一方向他有力地掌控着我。。。。。平了些，问好。

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