敦智
童生
Joined: 18 Jun 2007
Posts: 40
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 Posted: 2007-11-03 10:49:14 Post subject: 七律 感怀 |
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本是庸人性亦蛮，偏难入俗任疏顽。
惯看天地风云变，敢问打工途陌艰。
肯与白丁沽白酒，醉将青眼对青山。
年来频下伤时泪，秋月春花不一般。 |
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黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2007-11-03 14:40:03 Post subject: |
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第三联工整意深，欣赏。
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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游向高原的鱼
秀才
Joined: 20 May 2007
Posts: 382
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| Posted: 2007-11-04 01:50:13 Post subject: |
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肯与白丁沽白酒，醉将青眼对青山。
欣赏！
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人生乃是一面镜子，在其中认识自己。 |
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敦智
童生
Joined: 18 Jun 2007
Posts: 40
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| Posted: 2007-11-04 05:57:46 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢二位老师点评，一一问好。 |
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qinghongh
榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
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| Posted: 2007-11-04 14:14:47 Post subject: |
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| 有潇洒之气概。 |
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敦智
童生
Joined: 18 Jun 2007
Posts: 40
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| Posted: 2007-11-05 06:19:49 Post subject: |
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[quote="qinghongh"]有潇洒之气概。[/quote]
谢谢点评，问好。 |
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晓松
举人
Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Posts: 1192
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| Posted: 2007-11-14 17:10:06 Post subject: |
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敦智兄的诗别有一番意境，言语通俗意不俗。
尤其欣赏“肯与白丁沽白酒，醉将青眼对青山”两句，既平易近俗又傲骨脱俗。 |
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