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荷华媚－莲（新韵）
莹雪
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PostPosted: 2007-10-28 17:43:06    Post subject: 荷华媚－莲（新韵） Reply with quote

新妆舞芳就，舒青叶、伴水仙姿豪客。
红娇临水秀，悠闲照影，畅怀消暑热。

每观玩、常慕高洁意，待到清秋临，无怨风恶。
飘摇去、暮秋葬，明春期再旺，依留韵色。
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PostPosted: 2007-10-29 11:21:31    Post subject: Re: 荷华媚－莲（新韵） Reply with quote
莹雪 wrote:

新妆舞芳就，舒青叶、伴水仙姿豪客。
红娇临水秀，悠闲照影，畅怀消暑热。

每观玩、常慕高洁意，待到清秋临，无怨风恶。
飘摇去、暮秋葬，明春期再旺，依留韵色。

意韵深妙,更欣赏下片.。
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莹雪
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Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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PostPosted: 2007-10-29 17:17:22    Post subject: Re: 荷华媚－莲（新韵） Reply with quote
冰清 wrote:
莹雪 wrote:

新妆舞芳就，舒青叶、伴水仙姿豪客。
红娇临水秀，悠闲照影，畅怀消暑热。

每观玩、常慕高洁意，待到清秋临，无怨风恶。
飘摇去、暮秋葬，明春期再旺，依留韵色。

意韵深妙,更欣赏下片.。
谢谢冰清老师点评！
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