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破茧成蝶

樱花听雨
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Posted: 2007-10-29 07:30:08 Post subject: 破茧成蝶

破茧成蝶我已经兑变好象人们不记得我的原型我真的踉跄过只是没有跌倒或者选择了最好的姿势飞不是向后这些都不重要我始终弄不明白我的翅膀已经离散了身体为什么还有那么多纷扬的记忆 _________________ 樱花听雨搜狐博客樱花听雨新浪博客

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Posted: 2007-10-29 09:09:17 Post subject:

欣赏并问候。 _________________ syr@shiyanren.com 冷巉湖北省十堰市茅箭区三堰邮政小区48号信箱 442000

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Posted: 2007-10-29 15:23:06 Post subject:

http://www.shiyanren.com/bbs 这是什么地方的论坛？ _________________ 樱花听雨搜狐博客樱花听雨新浪博客

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Posted: 2007-10-29 16:33:26 Post subject:

最后两句，画龙点睛之笔。提读。

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Posted: 2007-10-29 16:48:56 Post subject:

简洁　　韵味欣赏！ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2007-10-29 17:48:08 Post subject:

风动 wrote:

最后两句，画龙点睛之笔。提读。

谢谢阅读，问好风动。
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Posted: 2007-10-29 17:48:47 Post subject:

问好阿依琼裙。 _________________ 樱花听雨搜狐博客樱花听雨新浪博客

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Posted: 2007-10-29 19:23:51 Post subject:

记忆是美的飞絮

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Posted: 2007-10-30 19:49:34 Post subject:

已经离散了身体为什么还有那么多纷扬的记忆令人深思！问好！！ _________________ 认为诗是悬崖上的孤松，栖鸟是她唯一的养料我的博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/pengshixue 《网文荟萃》报：http://bbs.wangwenw.com/index.asp

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Posted: 2007-10-30 20:01:20 Post subject:

彭世学 wrote:

已经离散了身体
为什么还有那么多纷扬的记忆

令人深思！问好！！

谢谢、问好彭老师。
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