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初冬的大雾
宣城田斌
秀才


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PostPosted: 2007-10-24 23:23:55    Post subject: 初冬的大雾 Reply with quote

初冬的大雾

田 斌

一大早 大雾就蒙住了眼睛
初冬 50米开外
一片迷茫
早晨 在清瘦的河边行走
平静的河面 漂浮着一些杂物
几片枯黄的落叶 几块泡沫
无声地吸引着我的眼球
风在冷簌簌地吹
刺入骨头和内心 直达冬天的腹部
柔弱的草经不住寒冷 低下头
使无望的天空更加无望
直到太阳露出的脸
打开了我一天的心情




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半溪明月
榜眼


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PostPosted: 2007-10-25 16:20:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

直到太阳露出的脸
打开了我一天的心情

天气是会影响人的心情~
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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2007-10-27 17:18:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

好像只是单纯的写景。
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