William Zhou周道模
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 Posted: 2007-10-26 01:03:28 Post subject: [原创双语诗] 梅意沧桑 (三) |
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梅 意 沧 桑 (三)
江边剪成梅径
庸常划出一线风景
梅 绿 一 点
就点痛神经
只有跟她走啊
在命运黑洞
在历史深处
和伤口沁香的那朵
相契无语……
The Transformation of the Plum Tree
The path of plum trees extends along the river
A line of scenery marks off the mediocrity
One green blossom of the pulm tree
Han hurt my nerves already
I have to follow her
At the black hole of fate
At the depth of history
Overlap the blossom flowing fragrance
From her cut silently
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专家太忙，自改两次。欢迎批评。
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学习欣赏!周末愉快!
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《梅意沧桑》四首为一体，感谢0066翻出旧作展览。
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四首统一风格再改一次，老师们再批。
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