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阳台上的仙人掌

宣城田斌
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Posted: 2007-10-23 15:46:53 Post subject: 阳台上的仙人掌

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韩少君
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Posted: 2007-10-24 17:48:05 Post subject:

幸福即是平庸的生存.或者自足的生存 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

白水
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Posted: 2007-10-24 18:09:57 Post subject:

好题材. 感觉这首诗味淡了些. 己见, 不妥见谅

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