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《抓住了你秋天的最后一条尾巴》
乙木先生
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PostPosted: 2007-10-22 02:48:55    Post subject: 《抓住了你秋天的最后一条尾巴》 Reply with quote

《抓住了你秋天的最后一条尾巴》

想抓住你
却抓住了你秋天的
最后一条尾巴
你说你还爱我
咋看
你却像狐狸一样
虚伪而狡猾
别离了我九十零一天的你
不说句好话
却有那么狠心离去
这世界怎么像某些女人一样
负心背弃?
活者,谁不想伴随着自己热恋的爱人
有富同享,患难与共一直到白头携老!
我想,你呢?
不曾给我半点温柔甜蜜
秋风一吹
却留给了我可怜的
寒冷苍白一季!
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PostPosted: 2007-10-22 03:24:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

形象, 真情
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乙木先生
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PostPosted: 2007-10-22 04:15:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢白水兄赏读
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杨海军
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PostPosted: 2007-10-22 18:17:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
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子花
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PostPosted: 2007-10-22 19:42:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

学习!
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乙木先生
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PostPosted: 2007-10-22 19:43:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

杨海军 wrote:
不错

问好杨海军,远握
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