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寻找（四首）

淡水
童生

Joined: 06 Jul 2007
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Posted: 2007-10-20 16:58:40 Post subject: 寻找（四首）

羊群我们来到这个世界啃着青草，咀嚼土地的善良为守护我们的牧人和他忠实的犬我们成群结队那些守在暗处的眼睛从来没有离开过我们 2007，10，16 生存吞噬了无数条生命呼吸的，不呼吸的静止的，运动的为了延续自我的生吞噬了无数条词句名词，动词破折号，感叹号为了奉承思维的秩序世界在厮杀之中一群对付一群不知不觉，有意无意成为一种习惯 2007，10，17 箱子这只箱子随我多年比我年轻算不上古董一些照片一些证件夹在发黄的本里当我打不开他的时候他会抖落我不想说出来的点点滴滴 2007，10，18 寻找我们用一生追随时间变换花样找到了一些丢失了一些我们还在路上眼睛饱含新意 2007，10，18

白水
大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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Posted: 2007-10-20 19:41:29 Post subject:

哲思, 冷静

淡水
童生

Joined: 06 Jul 2007
Posts: 82

淡水Collection

Posted: 2007-10-22 12:28:32 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

哲思, 冷静

多谢白水点评。问好。

杨海军
进士出身

Joined: 01 Mar 2007
Posts: 2205
Location: 吉林
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Posted: 2007-10-22 17:27:59 Post subject:

好诗 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

淡水
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Posts: 82

淡水Collection

Posted: 2007-10-23 16:57:45 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

好诗

谢海军鼓励。远握。

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