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[原创]█爱上叠被子这件小事
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PostPosted: 2007-10-21 19:28:24    Post subject: [原创]█爱上叠被子这件小事 Reply with quote

█爱上叠被子这件小事

诗/邵鹏飞

每天早晨六点钟
和着室友酣畅淋漓的呼噜声
准时起床:
把翻卷的被子平行摊开
左侧向内折叠三分之一
右侧向内折叠三分之一
为人处事忍让三分之一
同时注意两边对齐
朋友与情敌两边对齐
亲情与爱情两边对齐
被头向内折叠四分之一
被尾向内折叠四分之一
道德良心各占四分之一
中间腾出缓冲的空间
叠与不叠需要缓冲的空间
付出与获得需要缓冲的空间
工作与私生活需要缓冲的空间
最后,将被头与被尾对等折叠
将昨天与今天对等折叠
将失望与希望对等折叠
将我自己对等折叠
然后放进有棱有角崭新的一天

2007.10.19于烟台
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PostPosted: 2007-10-21 19:54:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

有情趣
富哲理
最后一句, 很有棱角呀

欢迎邵鹏飞光临惠顾
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PostPosted: 2007-10-23 15:49:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢hepingdao老师,多多交流!问好!
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PostPosted: 2007-10-24 23:22:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏。有朝气的人生。
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