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五言中秋思故里

qinghongh
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Posted: 2007-10-14 19:07:01 Post subject: 五言中秋思故里

五言中秋思故里 2007年9月11日于多伦多明月圆中秋，杜康燃乡愁。万里桑梓地，父母已白头。电邮遥寄情，问候诸亲友。身居枫叶城，心系我神州。高楼遍地起，污水满江走。水库不停修，江河却断流。朱门大款肥，黑窑小工瘦。高歌赞盛世，贪腐几时休？

晓松
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Posted: 2007-10-15 16:41:46 Post subject:

qinghongh好诗，思乡之情跃然纸上。第二首不是思乡，另起个名会更好。

qinghongh
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Posted: 2007-10-21 19:06:21 Post subject:

谢晓松好建议！

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