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碑文敬亭山

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Posted: 2007-10-21 15:56:26 Post subject: 碑文敬亭山

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Posted: 2007-10-21 16:00:36 Post subject:

感觉这首诗的表现手法有些陈旧，但是一首好诗。如能在风格上变幻一下就好了。 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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