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<<灰色的天空>>
柿子
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Joined: 25 Sep 2007
Posts: 137
Location: 中国河南商丘职业技术学院大一
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PostPosted: 2007-10-20 22:53:08    Post subject: <<灰色的天空>> Reply with quote

我是一只孤独的丑小鸭
我失落地在空中飞着
风很大,天很黑
我看不清方向
却感到越来越疲惫
下面是点点闪烁的灯光
我知道那又是一个繁华的都市
可,那儿不是我的家
这些城市抛弃的我
我也抛弃的这些城市
我嘶哑地嚷叫了几下
却没有人回答



夜在风里颤抖
竟把秋雨也给渗了出来
天很冷,路很长
真的,我不知道路在何方
我就这样飞着,飞着.......
我不知何处可以流浪
也不知何处可以流浪?
雨在我脸上滴打





我稀疏羽毛的翅膀
只有两片肉叶还在拍打
我很狼狈,更加痛苦
我哭了
泪从眼角滑下
和这雨水一起被风吹洒
城市的灯光很亮
可是,却照不亮我的泪光
只有那阳台上的枯草
才会感觉到这雨水的异样
夜真的很长,很长......
雨一直下,风一直吹,
我一直飞,一直飞
虽然我飞的越来越低,越来越慢........
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2007-10-21 05:31:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

要精简才行~问好柿子!
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PostPosted: 2007-10-21 09:04:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

繁与简,可大致判断出年龄吧,哈哈。
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