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天河山水
奥冬
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PostPosted: 2007-10-17 16:37:21    Post subject: 天河山水 Reply with quote
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汩汩的水声缠我
像小羊羔左蹦右跳

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流水与鸟鸣争着山的控制权
我一来它们越发大声

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巴掌大的小潭
装进整座大山的倒影

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一条条一池池
立体描画山的梦境
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杨海军
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PostPosted: 2007-10-17 18:11:29    Post subject: Reply with quote
汩汩的水声缠我
像小羊羔左蹦右跳

好！！！
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-10-17 18:56:11    Post subject: Reply with quote
生动, 明快 Very Happy
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奥冬
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PostPosted: 2007-10-17 22:19:22    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢两位欣赏,问好
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2007-10-17 22:48:34    Post subject: Reply with quote
文字简洁。
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PostPosted: 2007-10-18 02:23:22    Post subject: Reply with quote
简洁明快。大诗如鹏，展云翳；小诗如蜂，一滴蜜．
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PostPosted: 2007-10-19 00:02:25    Post subject: Reply with quote
感谢欣赏,问好
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