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PostPosted: 2007-10-06 08:07:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

我感到中国人越来越以自我为中心了。丧了“天”,又死了“人”。
中国越来越西方化,这是不可逆转的趋势。只觉世界太鸹躁。

“原因是鸟粪污染了市委大院的地”,不看到还好些的。看到了真想破口大骂。
想用写诗来证明自己还是一个人,却往往失了温柔敦厚的美德。很多文章在我
看来如果不用唾骂来表现这个世界,很难取悦于我。
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PostPosted: 2007-10-06 17:43:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

伤城 wrote:
我感到中国人越来越以自我为中心了。丧了“天”,又死了“人”。
中国越来越西方化,这是不可逆转的趋势。只觉世界太鸹躁。

“原因是鸟粪污染了市委大院的地”,不看到还好些的。看到了真想破口大骂。
想用写诗来证明自己还是一个人,却往往失了温柔敦厚的美德。很多文章在我
看来如果不用唾骂来表现这个世界,很难取悦于我。


伤城,理解你的心情. 却不能完全赞同你的意见.唾骂是一种义愤, 有时我们却更需要深思.
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PostPosted: 2007-10-11 07:44:14    Post subject: Re: 山里的孩子 Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
山里的孩子

平湖? 平湖是波澜不惊的美人
一张沉甸甸的面具
血脉不通的躯体
早已载不动 太多虚妄的沉痼
闪电在夜幕中
颤抖手术台银白色的小刀
我突然感到心疼
金属与金属的碰撞和蜷缩在病榻上
沮丧的你



单单阅读着触目首段疼惜的,附加诗题【山里的孩子】
令我想及偏远贫瘠地区而造的痛感。

一如前述读者所言,袭击的痛感


冰夕阅后有感。问候 白水 关切人文诗心握笔
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PostPosted: 2007-10-12 22:07:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

沉痛的思考!
问候白水!
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PostPosted: 2007-10-13 04:24:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

耐品的一首诗!问好诗人!!
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PostPosted: 2007-10-15 17:41:19    Post subject: Re: 山里的孩子 Reply with quote

冰夕 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
山里的孩子

平湖? 平湖是波澜不惊的美人
一张沉甸甸的面具
血脉不通的躯体
早已载不动 太多虚妄的沉痼
闪电在夜幕中
颤抖手术台银白色的小刀
我突然感到心疼
金属与金属的碰撞和蜷缩在病榻上
沮丧的你



单单阅读着触目首段疼惜的,附加诗题【山里的孩子】
令我想及偏远贫瘠地区而造的痛感。

一如前述读者所言,袭击的痛感


冰夕阅后有感。问候 白水 关切人文诗心握笔


冰夕, 怎么这几天不见你呢? 喜欢你的诗歌.
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PostPosted: 2007-10-15 17:42:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

荷梦 wrote:
沉痛的思考!
问候白水!

谢谢梦荷, 想读到你的新诗. 问好
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PostPosted: 2007-10-15 17:42:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

彭世学 wrote:
耐品的一首诗!问好诗人!!


谢谢鼓励, 问好朋友.
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PostPosted: 2007-10-16 19:11:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水好诗。
高湖美景能多久?
生态难平子孙愁。
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PostPosted: 2007-10-16 20:55:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
白水好诗。
高湖美景能多久?
生态难平子孙愁。


谢谢鼓励. 这首诗歌原本想再改改的, 那日听了你的一席话, 我反到没有勇气动手术了. 地理, 人文等一系列纵横交错问题, 使我深感自己的知识容量无法理出一个清晰的思路去拓展此诗的深度. 还是当个婴儿吧. Razz
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PostPosted: 2007-10-16 21:21:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

关注苍生,疼痛的笔调.问好
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PostPosted: 2007-10-17 18:54:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

顾小花 wrote:
关注苍生,疼痛的笔调.问好


谢谢小花. 共勉
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PostPosted: 2007-10-17 19:04:31    Post subject: 回 Reply with quote

白水才女关注生态环境,应和戈尔共享今年的诺贝尔和平奖!

读白水《山里的孩子》有感

2007年10月17日于多伦多

高峡平湖能多久?
生态失衡神女羞。
战天斗地旧时梦,
水乡泽国明日忧。
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PostPosted: 2007-10-18 20:36:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢QINGHONGH, 我要真获诺贝尔和平奖准把奖金全捐 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-10-18 21:51:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

好像白水最近有新动向,哈哈.关注比较多. 除了这个,又如往事如烟.
扔诺贝尔奖前告诉下,我穿有100个口袋的衣服去你家门口等着...
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PostPosted: 2007-10-18 22:53:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
谢谢QINGHONGH, 我要真获诺贝尔和平奖准把奖金全捐 Very Happy


白水令了奖,先请我们北美枫的朋友海一顿~ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-10-19 03:25:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

来读白水诗人的《山里的孩子》,很亲切。问好!
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PostPosted: 2007-12-03 14:05:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢雅君, 久不见, 甚念.
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PostPosted: 2007-12-03 14:15:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢这首和诗, 抓来先.已留言给此才女, 她不同意我还得还回去 Crying or Very sad

对山里的孩子说:你好!
杜杜

朦胧的你,来了
用山里的眼睛凝视村庄
把病床上金属的碰撞
揉碎,挤进悒郁的乳房
为什么孕育的惊悸
会变成天鹅的翅膀
还有唐古拉山
与你焦虑的唇紧密的捆绑

朦胧的你,来了
讲着美人与面具的虚妄
还有鱼的眼泪和碎石的断肠
城里的孩子不必懂得村庄
和来自那里悠悠的目光
只要揣好你深深的梦想
还有你的巫山与大江
在村口的风中站稳
坚定着你的瞭望

你好!山里的孩子
用你的朦胧把村口的钟,敲响
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