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三个临屏
顾小花
童生


Joined: 23 Aug 2007
Posts: 80
Location: 中国南京
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PostPosted: 2007-10-18 20:13:10    Post subject: 三个临屏 Reply with quote

大地的思索
文/小草

转不过身来,你是呜咽的海
那些浪,卷了五千年或者更远
风往自己的根里猛长
放眼,月光又后退几步

有些时候,雪花打开另外的天空
被遗弃的鸟巢高过露水,当然
十月要丰收,阳春赶着发芽
谁还会爱上一个旧的太阳

万物经过身体,生命覆盖生命
雨,习惯性的逃离一朵云
在季节的背后洗刷时间的影子
天空压下来,水土沉重

放大的记忆
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退却,再一次退却
让开疯长的云,落魄的风
河流第一次离开土地
天空在最近的地方

最后的雨,落在梦和身体之间
都是飞翔着的姿态
许多的风景从山顶落下来
争先恐后,又似是而非

远方的消息,经过呻吟
就到无声。而春天重复出现
花朵,一个劲地开放
说起月圆,杯中的水就满

望着我的眼睛
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有必要说出赤裸
沿着月光,抵达最干净的海
我是无限坠落的风
大地也不一定是方向

山水如此安逸
流云之上,我该脱离梦
听灵魂在幸福中升起
摘下最先打开的玫瑰

然后,有音乐会来
血液要流向森林的深处
不需要等到夜晚
便可以听到钟声
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白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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PostPosted: 2007-10-18 20:20:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

灵动, 自然. 文思流于心.
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迪拜
同进士出身


Joined: 31 Oct 2006
Posts: 1588

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PostPosted: 2007-10-18 20:57:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

<放大的记忆>

不错
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nobody
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Joined: 31 Dec 2006
Posts: 2651
Location: Madtown
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PostPosted: 2007-10-18 21:04:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

都是寻常字词,被你一组合,都过六一儿童节---穿新衣服认不出来了,哈哈。
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半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760

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PostPosted: 2007-10-18 22:17:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

有些时候,雪花打开另外的天空
被遗弃的鸟巢高过露水,当然
十月要丰收,阳春赶着发芽
谁还会爱上一个旧的太阳


hehe ,真不错,正像NOBODY说的,平常的意象字词,被你一整合,读起来就很有新意了~欣赏,学习了!
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赵雅君
童生


Joined: 07 Aug 2007
Posts: 99

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PostPosted: 2007-10-19 03:17:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

来读小花的诗,诗风淳朴,语言灵动有张力,有内涵和质量的诗歌,欣赏了。
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