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圆缺又如何？

荷梦
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Posted: 2007-10-01 05:51:01 Post subject: 圆缺又如何？

回忆这些天，我一直在画八月十五的月亮却总画不回1995年时的模样它一直藏着,在一堆旧照片里,泛黄静如止水风早就停了是跟某个字一起的相约而去的，还有悲和欢更有疼与痛应该说，那水现在很平很静.相机一样照过缺月照圆月明晰得很没有波纹荡起

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Posted: 2007-10-01 06:26:59 Post subject:

明晰得很没有波纹荡起国庆快乐，问好荷梦～

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Posted: 2007-10-01 11:43:21 Post subject:

来细读。。太短了：）应该有起承转结。。。。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-10-03 10:55:35 Post subject:

梦荷, 前两天BAISHUI D S G 龙体欠安, 竟漏读了这首诗歌. 静静细品, 好感人. 问好

刘雨萍
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Posted: 2007-10-03 11:43:46 Post subject: Re: 圆缺又如何？

[quote="荷梦"]*回忆这些天，我一直在画八月十五的月亮却总画不回1995年时的模样它一直藏着,在一堆旧照片里,泛黄现实与回忆总有差异. 问好. _________________ 隔海抒情

荷梦
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Posted: 2007-10-11 01:27:27 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

明晰得很
没有波纹荡起

国庆快乐，问好荷梦～

国庆都过了这么多天了呢,汗~~才看到这帖子.给明月回好!

荷梦
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Posted: 2007-10-11 01:31:11 Post subject:

kokho wrote:

来细读。。太短了：）

应该有起承转结。。。

。。

谢谢评读。让你失望了，一些心情随笔，没想到什么起承转结的。 Embarassed

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Posted: 2007-10-11 01:34:06 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

梦荷, 前两天BAISHUI D S G Razz

龙体欠安, 竟漏读了这首诗歌. 静静细品, 好感人.

问好 Very Happy

给白水回好！现在龙体已大安了吧？呵呵！

荷梦
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Posted: 2007-10-11 01:41:14 Post subject: Re: 圆缺又如何？

[quote="刘雨萍"]

荷梦 wrote:

*回忆

这些天，我一直在画
八月十五的月亮
却总画不回1995年时的模样

它一直藏着,在一堆
旧照片里,泛黄

现实与回忆总有差异.
问好.

是啊，时间总会带走许多许多。
谢谢评阅！回好！

kokho
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Posted: 2007-10-18 14:21:34 Post subject:

。努力呀朋友：）。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-10-18 18:25:01 Post subject:

kokho wrote:

来细读。。太短了：）

应该有起承转结。。。

。。

同意!!

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