梅奈何 童生
Joined: 20 Feb 2007 Posts: 75 Location: 天津 梅奈何Collection |
Posted: 2007-10-17 00:29:27 Post subject: 七律-枫叶重阳 |
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七律-枫叶重阳
文/梅奈何
秋深林下满枯叶,远似碎金行若毡;
曾蔽骄阳护嫩草,也迎瀑雨壮柔肩。
残生踌躇染红树,赤血煷然冲碧天;
日月轮回花几盛,寻根故里有慈颜。 _________________ 梅骨傲严寒,风霜奈我何
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2007-10-17 16:56:34 Post subject: |
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律精意深。 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-10-17 18:40:30 Post subject: |
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日月轮回花几盛,寻根故里有慈颜。
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不亦悦乎 童生
Joined: 02 Apr 2007 Posts: 40
不亦悦乎Collection |
Posted: 2007-10-18 07:05:22 Post subject: |
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够豪情的。 |
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