Maple Review :: View topic - 再帖几首短的～

	Chinese Literature Society of North America \| Maple Review \| Immigrants in Canada \| Angel Studio \| The Driftwood Artist Society \| Ocean of Poetry \| Island of Music "HuaHe Cup" 2007 Chinese Mainland and Oversea Poetry Competition and Non-governmental Magazines and Newspapers Joint Exhibition starts on the first day of 2007.
	FAQ Search Memberlist Usergroups Register Profile Log in to check your private messages Sign in Blogs Weblogs News Album



Dictionary Check Poems' Rules & Forms Search for Chinese Poems Poetry & Music

Maple Review Home -> 现代诗歌

再帖几首短的～

半溪明月
榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760

半溪明月Collection

Posted: 2007-10-16 10:55:13 Post subject: 再帖几首短的～

8 　　才１０点。昨夜的星星没有出现，天更黑了指针，被冷冻伤脚步趔趄。滴答着呻吟走不动的时间，疲惫不堪起身，拐进暖暖的被窝 9 一根羽毛，可以留字也可以在心头拂扫花一个晚上也没抓住那只拿羽毛的手此刻，正藏在暗处恶作剧地　　笑我是放入台前的偶人 10 初冬，天黑得更早在刺目光线中小心穿行向左，一，二，三向右，三，二，一冲过几道关卡迈上繁华的步行街大铁铲翻腾着锅里的沙石香甜的栗子发出诱人的光泽而更大的美食还在深处穿过这个长廊就可看见老师手抓一只猪碲，笑呵呵地啃　　 11 锁紧大门。你们谁也别想进来讨厌和喜欢由一根神经控制拉一下喜欢，再拉一下讨厌这个深夜，我一直拉这根绳子心亮心灭，都是我一个人的事　　　12 我计划着一次逃逸不准备捞起湿淋淋的月亮就在水里泡着吧拖动鼠标就能复制很多有人是否画得更圆这是搁置了几年的难题摆上案几打开。无解的答案有人一直在　等我不是那人

hepingdao
Site Admin

Joined: 25 May 2006
Posts: 8106

hepingdaoCollection

Posted: 2007-10-16 11:03:27 Post subject:

思绪纷纷扬扬 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

半溪明月
榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760

半溪明月Collection

Posted: 2007-10-16 16:31:30 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

思绪纷纷扬扬

写了很多天的,集中发上来~

迪拜
同进士出身

Joined: 31 Oct 2006
Posts: 1588

迪拜Collection

Posted: 2007-10-16 16:54:32 Post subject:

第9 好象,有点意思

半溪明月
榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760

半溪明月Collection

Posted: 2007-10-16 17:24:22 Post subject:

迪拜 wrote:

第9

好象,有点意思

呵呵，我会抓到那人的~ Very Happy

nobody
进士出身

Joined: 31 Dec 2006
Posts: 2651
Location: Madtown
nobodyCollection

Posted: 2007-10-16 17:39:32 Post subject:

越来越灵动了, 欣赏 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

韩少君
进士出身

Joined: 06 Apr 2007
Posts: 2558
Location: 吉林四平
韩少君Collection

Posted: 2007-10-16 19:43:00 Post subject:

本人也提倡短诗短评．短诗更俊永，更简约含蓄．不错的一组，欣赏！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

顾小花
童生

Joined: 23 Aug 2007
Posts: 80
Location: 中国南京
顾小花Collection

Posted: 2007-10-16 20:44:32 Post subject:

很富有想象的片段.继续找......问好 _________________ 春风吹又生:http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1285636777

博弈
榜眼

Joined: 21 Dec 2006
Posts: 4381
Location: SFO
博弈Collection

Posted: 2007-10-17 01:27:37 Post subject:

11 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

杨海军
进士出身

Joined: 01 Mar 2007
Posts: 2205
Location: 吉林
杨海军Collection

Posted: 2007-10-17 17:53:27 Post subject:

赞同少君诗人的意见 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

半溪明月
榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760

半溪明月Collection

Posted: 2007-10-22 08:57:15 Post subject:

问好ＮＯＢＯＤＹ／小花／博弈和海军，感谢阅读～

Display posts from previous:

Emoticons





View more Emoticons

Page 1 of 1 View previous topic View next topic

Maple Review Home -> 现代诗歌

Once you post your works here, that means you submits them to the magazine of Maple Review (North American Maple, or BeiMeiFeng), a bilingual journal published by Chinese Literature Society of North America. The magazine holds the right to translate them into Chinese, and publish them in both languages. You need to be responsible for the copyright issues of your own files uploaded.
Powered by phpBB © 2001, 2005 phpBB Group
phpBB Chinese interface was translated by iCy-fLaME