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《梦醒时分》

墨林
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Posted: 2007-10-16 03:28:49 Post subject: 《梦醒时分》

《梦醒时分》　文／墨林　好象他来过 DHEA的味道滞留在我的沙发上门外　通向花园的小径牵着一串沉重的步履他果真来过透明而新鲜的呼吸凝固在我的房间里窗外　飞机划过头顶撒下一行如雷的震颤没有错　一切都过去了在誓言里在床上半截伤痛斜依烟缸一帘幽梦如云飘散爱　恨　恩　怨搅着混　沉淀着清恍惚写字台上那张照片　不翼而飞 http://blog.sina.com.cn/dmdqw _________________ 诗歌是不朽的人性之美的灵光;诗歌是人类最纯粹的精神家园。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/dmdqw http://blog.bandao.cn/archive/8025/

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-10-16 04:41:43 Post subject:

好诗.熟练简约含蓄.内敛. _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-10-16 05:57:38 Post subject:

无言，问好！

墨林
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Posted: 2007-10-17 03:43:43 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

好诗.熟练简约含蓄.内敛.

谢，韩少君的评与鼓励！问好．
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kokho
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Posted: 2007-10-18 14:05:05 Post subject:

。很现代的处理手法：）比一般朗诵诗超越了好几级！！！。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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