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地锅
一树摇风
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PostPosted: 2006-11-27 01:43:14    Post subject: 地锅 Reply with quote

一口锅端坐在大地之上
年迈而又清瘦的柴禾们
不约而同的聚拢过来
它们自愿捧出
伤疤上的盐巴和皱纹里的芝麻粒
一簇怀揣清贫的
烟火 映亮五谷善良的脸庞
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掀开锅盖儿就像
跛者抛下手杖
哑巴翻动舌头
盲人祛除眼障
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幸福 原来就在这口小小的锅中隐居
泥巴挨着锅巴
苦痛挨着甜美
谁将大地的余温传给
那片正在回家的艾叶
 
            2006.11.27
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和平岛
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PostPosted: 2006-11-27 12:08:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

一树摇风能够把每一个命题都挖掘得很有深度
言语纯熟, 诗意也很浓
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一树摇风
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PostPosted: 2006-11-27 19:34:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢岛兄鼓励!远握~~
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维鹿延
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PostPosted: 2006-11-28 02:48:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

锅里人生。
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