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窗台
雨中垂钓人
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PostPosted: 2007-10-14 13:51:40    Post subject: 窗台 Reply with quote

一个窗台你一半、我一半,
趴在窗台俯视窗外。
一个窗台你一半、我一半,
你在室内我在室外。
一个窗台你一半、我一半,
我看窗内你看窗外。
从童年的故事到青春的梦想,
欢乐洋溢在窗里窗外。
那时的窗台不高,
站在地上与你说话。
那时没有玫瑰,
窗台上常常有我摘来的花。
手拉手的时候,
总有写不完的作业。
窗里窗外的时候,
却有说不完的话。
窗台里是你的家,
窗台外挨着我的家,
窗台边度过了青春年华。
记忆里的窗台就在眼前,
你和我的窗台却远在天涯。
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白水
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Location: TORONTO
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PostPosted: 2007-10-15 17:35:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

这首意境不错, 文字似可稍敛. 问好.
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