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(原创)捎去一缕桂花香(外一首)
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 03:54:01    Post subject: (原创)捎去一缕桂花香(外一首) Reply with quote

捎去一缕桂花香(外一首)

王晓琴


月光,将秋意
提前在两个距离之间预约
让你动情在思乡的枕上


月饼,寄去
细碎的飘落,丝丝体香
和一个实实在在的吻


饮着夜露,走进我的影
我用一缕香甜拥抱你的梦境





预约桂花香


王晓琴


一缕体香便醉了你
醉你,在月光里
在夜露里


我的预约就招摇在枝头
我的给予却躲进月饼
躲成一个渴望
贴成一个月亮
饮着夜露,走近我的影
我用香甜拥抱你的梦境


桂花,提前预约了
我的心事
一叶秋思


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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 16:15:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

有经典的美
但还是缺乏惊艳之处
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PostPosted: 2007-10-15 00:26:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢指点!
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