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我是我的狱吏
韩少君
进士出身


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PostPosted: 2007-10-14 14:04:40    Post subject: 我是我的狱吏 Reply with quote

我是我的狱吏


不知道你认不认识我

我是看管监牢的人

牢狱里关着一颗心

它企图往远方捎音信




我从动词上来

(一个心理动词)

每天夜深人静时候

才开始上班



监牢用骨骼支撑

刚好围住那颗红色的火种,它

跳得动,跑不动



不知道你认不认识我

我是痛苦的亲哥哥

在监守红心的同时

还在寻找失散的妹妹


谁看见了告诉我:

她不叫快乐

叫默默、漠漠或者脉脉

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黑雨滴
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Joined: 11 Jun 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-10-14 20:53:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

每个人都负责着自己行为的底线,自己看着自己,呵呵,人生啊
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2007-10-14 22:05:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗人的情感都是不可靠的,冲动的~等过段时间你会觉得自己写这些很可笑!
问好少君!
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-10-15 17:31:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

不知道你认不认识我

我是痛苦的亲哥哥

在监守红心的同时

还在寻找失散的妹妹

在另一个诗坛有位诗人, 诗歌多是写给他的恋人的. 后来一位了解他的朋友对我说, 他的恋人, 就是他的诗歌. 那么你的MM是谁呢?
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2007-10-16 05:23:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水说到我心里去啦------

真无具体所指----凡是美丽的.自由的.纯洁的,我都热爱-----尽管我并不纯洁,但我不敢亵渎纯洁;尽管我不高尚,但我不敢忘却高尚;虽然我心里暗淡,但还是愿意活在光明里,死在阳光下------

谢谢白水明月-----你们皆是诗歌的MM(妹妹)
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顾小花
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PostPosted: 2007-10-16 21:44:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

这个暗喻散射的好.问候!
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