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qinghongh
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Posted: 2007-10-14 19:03:36 Post subject: 七绝感恩节周末赏枫

七绝感恩节周末赏枫 2007年10月7日，与秋叶，白水，李淇，万沐，巍拔诸诗友驱车赏枫，戏作一首。驾车北去观秋叶，湖畔欢言有白水。小径离奇难找觅，（李淇迷路）万木红艳吟诗回。（万沐诵诗）

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Posted: 2007-10-14 19:07:17 Post subject:

HI, 真高兴你终于顺利登陆北美枫. 你真行, 一首诗歌把我们都装进去了

qinghongh
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Posted: 2007-10-14 19:23:19 Post subject:

白水，谢谢你引路。我真是盲人骑瞎马，夜半临深池，如临深渊，如履薄冰啊！

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Posted: 2007-10-14 19:35:00 Post subject:

雅兴也来哼几句，凑趣：红枫映山山映湖白水行云云倒流三千才子吟不住唯见秋叶画中游 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-10-14 19:53:38 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

白水，谢谢你引路。我真是盲人骑瞎马，夜半临深池，如临深渊，如履薄冰啊！ Shocked

白水

是天上的那盏灯
还是湖边的那枝柳
千回百折，也只不过是
一弯腰的工夫
冰也化了
脚也湿了
花也明了
眼也开了

Wink

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Posted: 2007-10-14 20:02:15 Post subject:

白水快手，随手挥撒即是诗。

白水
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Posted: 2007-10-14 20:09:32 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

白水快手，随手挥撒即是诗。

QINGHONG, 你错了, 这是和平岛. 小心点, 他可是花果山的猴王变的. 你们两位可谓棋逢对手, 将遇良才 Wink

白水
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Posted: 2007-10-14 20:24:32 Post subject:

你除了会气我, 还有什么高招和平岛太平洋中的石头还是阳光下那只白鸽? 千次回首, 却衔不来一根橄榄枝我索性合上眼帘看秋日的红叶天也蓝了草也绿了呼啸的山风滴落叮咚的鸽哨

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-10-14 20:24:57 Post subject:

猴王的对手是魔王谁做呢，白水 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

白水
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Posted: 2007-10-14 20:26:40 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

猴王的对手是魔王
谁做呢，白水
Laughing

你再吹一根毫毛不就有了吗? Wink

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Posted: 2007-10-14 20:36:42 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

hepingdao wrote:

猴王的对手是魔王
谁做呢，白水
Laughing

你再吹一根毫毛不就有了吗? Wink

我吹了半天
才流出一滴口水

woaaaaaa

白水
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Posted: 2007-10-14 20:47:56 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

hepingdao wrote:

猴王的对手是魔王
谁做呢，白水
Laughing

你再吹一根毫毛不就有了吗? Wink

我吹了半天
才流出一滴口水

woaaaaaa

一滴口水顺腮流
两根毫毛填打油
古墓半载砾青剑
截断素稿祭春秋

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-10-14 21:01:33 Post subject:

呵呵，好玩~

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-10-14 21:41:29 Post subject:

好玩 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

白水
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Posted: 2007-10-15 17:44:38 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

呵呵，好玩~

月亮, 一起来玩

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Posted: 2007-10-15 17:46:46 Post subject:

不错！好像没完，应该是场上休息~

白水
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Posted: 2007-10-15 17:49:02 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

好玩

好玩怎么不练了, 又去古墓磨剑了? 下一次上场该削纸如泥了 Wink

白水
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Posted: 2007-10-15 17:52:36 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

不错！好像没完，应该是场上休息~

晓松, 下半场该你打擂了. 那猴王在找对手呢 Very Happy

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Posted: 2007-10-15 18:00:23 Post subject:

晓松
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Posted: 2007-10-15 20:09:49 Post subject:

莹雪先上场，别老光笑~

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