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生命的痕迹
zijian
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Joined: 09 Jun 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-10-05 06:05:01    Post subject: 生命的痕迹 Reply with quote

2007-09-27 | 生命的痕迹

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窒息的生命
在干枯的躯体
留下了
渴望再生的点点滴滴
那些纹落里
遍体鳞伤的痕迹
是否是最后的争扎
写在最后的日子

看着那些落叶
还有
山间断层里的沉积岩体
谁会知道
他们曾经来过
来过这条河
走过这条路
而不被人发现的
便是他们用生命与时间
写意了人类的过去

看着山泉
溢泻在谷底
知道吗
那是他们的眼泪
充满着遗憾与期冀的眼泪
遗憾着人生自古谁无死
期冀着别后绝处再重生

于是
每走过秋凄叶落时节
我总是一份黯然
一份渴望
......




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韩少君
进士出身


Joined: 06 Apr 2007
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Location: 吉林四平
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PostPosted: 2007-10-14 01:40:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

你的博客图片太美了.
诗歌再加把劲儿啊.
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雨中垂钓人
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PostPosted: 2007-10-15 09:47:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

因为这首诗,看了你的诗歌文学集。很佩服你内心的那种美感,尤其《到底有没有天堂》。但是,标点符号你应该标上。使人更明白你的感受,同时接受你的感受。
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