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文字是雨

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-10-06 17:36:21 Post subject: 文字是雨

9 窗外的雨啊为什么淋漓不停诗人啊,我亲爱的兄弟如果我的悲伤,如雨倾泻那么,文字是雨白字黑字白的是花,黑的是纱一朵一朵,被雨淋湿

白水
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Posted: 2007-10-06 17:50:31 Post subject:

月亮, 理解.

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2007-10-07 15:36:18 Post subject:

月亮的情思，是晶莹的清辉。你想安慰流泪的小草，披着月光他还是要枯萎…… _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-10-07 15:47:50 Post subject:

让人心痛！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

sgb
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Posted: 2007-10-08 00:50:27 Post subject:

伤感

爱松
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Posted: 2007-10-08 04:32:11 Post subject:

动情啊！

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-10-10 04:21:01 Post subject:

但愿你是花但愿我是纱但愿花儿开在纱的身外啊但愿明月照见不是黑纱挽成的花我已结束休假我愿擎起热烈的纱和明媚的花让银色的光照见(少君)他亲戚或余悲他人亦已歌死去何所道拖体同山阿 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

下一个偶像是野兽
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Posted: 2007-10-10 07:42:04 Post subject:

如果我的悲伤,如雨倾泻那么,文字是雨白字黑字白的是花,黑的是纱一朵一朵,被雨淋湿 _________________ 我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1251343504

冰夕
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Posted: 2007-10-10 09:43:53 Post subject: Re: 文字是雨

半溪明月 wrote:

9
窗外的雨啊
为什么淋漓不停
诗人啊,我亲爱的兄弟
如果我的悲伤,如雨倾泻

那么,文字是雨
白字黑字
白的是花,黑的是纱

一朵一朵,被雨淋湿

白的花　黑的纱
文字如雨的诗人兄弟

很亮点的[文字是雨]

冰夕阅后有感。问好半溪明月
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