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我穿过一张叶子

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-10-09 09:18:16 Post subject: 我穿过一张叶子

我穿过缀满红叶的枫林, 如太阳嚼碎的遍地斑驳, 我愿意做一枚水波不兴的叶子, 随过往的岁月从你的四肢流过一阵风刮起, 我愿意是那朵海鸥一样的浪花用洁白的翅膀栖上你春天的枝头你瞳孔里的那滴泪花呀是我！你让我再一次看见这世界的美丽，你的娇柔

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-10-09 09:29:10 Post subject:

诗人生存只是瞬间的行为诈骗也罢, 自欺欺人也罢只有死亡死亡才是永恒的艺术 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-10-09 17:45:52 Post subject: Re: 我穿过一张叶子

hepingdao wrote:

我穿过缀满红叶
的枫林, 如太阳嚼碎的
遍地斑驳,
我愿意做一张
水波不兴的叶子,
随过往的岁月
从你的四肢流过
一阵风刮起,
我愿意是那朵
海鸥一样的浪花
用洁白的翅膀
栖上你春天般
温暖的枝头
你瞳孔里的那滴泪花呀
是我, 你再一次
让我看见
这世界的美丽
你的娇柔

一种大情怀~
优美抒情,学习! Smile

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-10-09 17:49:52 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

诗人

生存只是瞬间的行为
诈骗也罢, 自欺欺人也罢
只有死亡
死亡才是永恒的艺术

什么行为艺术
简直是对诗人感情的一种玷污
文艺败类
一个不尊重生死的人
他首先不配做人
更不用说诗人

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-10-09 17:52:35 Post subject:

我穿过一张叶子应该用现代的意识重新写一下 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-10-09 18:01:16 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

我穿过一张叶子

应该用现代的意识
重新写一下

呵呵，这个传统了点~不过看了这么多的诗歌，还是传统的诗歌比较美和耐读!诗歌首先应该要给人一种美感吧!

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2007-10-10 19:02:01 Post subject:

岛主近来在恋爱吧？多数诗都是爱意浓浓的，不要感染我了哈！ _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2007-10-10 19:45:43 Post subject:

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

岛主近来在恋爱吧？多数诗都是爱意浓浓的，不要感染我了哈！

也感染我了，嘿嘿~~~
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