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<皇后峡谷>
迪拜
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PostPosted: 2006-11-26 16:50:36    Post subject: <皇后峡谷> Reply with quote

我要带你去那一片鲜花,草地和丛林
亲爱的,你要按时服药
虽然,画作还没有完成
但是,已经有了蓝色的天空

走过很多地方
总希望出现人烟
这一次,我却
只想看到鲜花,草地和丛林

当然,会有众多的皇后
在那里相聚,晨露间充盈了
同样的呼吸,我已经收到了
讯息,红色的请柬上可以听到流水淙淙

皇后们的舞会正在准备,萤火虫
牵起了篝火的手,爱人们
愉悦欢畅,把身体交给我们的
爱人,让他的手轻轻抚弄你脸上的须茬

丛林葱郁繁盛,草地
无垠的碧绿,光芒消融着
一声声沉重的呼吸,每一片
阴影的后面都没有多余的窥视

丛林的一角,有我们的
处女领地,溪流蜿蜒而过,无论是
星辰,还是阳光照耀,我们
亲吻着,拥抱相互渴慕的肌体

我看见了,这里是断崖,飞耸的
崖下是溪流和炊烟,草地是
黄绿的青涩,鲜花刚刚开了口
丛林贴着陡峭的岩壁倔强地挺立着

纵深而宽阔的大峡谷连接了
天际的烟色,一侧耸立的崖壁上
横贯着凹凸不平“彩虹的标记”,那是
皇后的“典籍”里远古的流传

从峡谷望去,两端看不到何处是它的
尽头,隔绝了世间的纷扰,崖顶的
一侧,几近冰原,戈壁,岩砾的原生
纵横一泻,阡陌的沼泽与厚重的积水交缠纠葛

我们的身旁,是层峦叠嶂的天国的
根须,陡峭的岩壁和我们脚下咫尺的
旅程挡住了不断涌来的飞沙,路
在蜿蜒着,一种新绿在歌声中逐渐弥漫

我的男孩,你别害怕,睡吧,
我们即将抵达,山谷里的欢乐声音
已经传到蓝色的天空,爱人的舞姿
使绵延的溪流水花飞溅

我要轻轻地吻着你的喉结,我要
轻轻地吻着你的乳晕,你的体味
是我沐浴的香河,爱的芬芳
吸引着蜜蜂和蝴蝶翩翩飞过

亲爱的,你要按时服药,
我们要搭起帐篷,准备好晚餐
篝火已经燃烧,把你的胸口
给我,靠一靠我略有疲惫的脸庞

巴比伦,华尔兹,我愿时间
缓步,丛林送来了晚风作为贺礼
撩起你的手,抚一抚我的嘴唇
你的脸庞在繁星中是我的今夜
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和平岛
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Location: Victoria, Canada
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PostPosted: 2006-11-26 17:06:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗歌的阅读
首先在于全身心的投入
并欣赏

感谢分享
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左岸
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Joined: 12 Oct 2006
Posts: 215
Location: 中国大连
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PostPosted: 2006-11-26 17:28:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

我的男孩,你别害怕,睡吧,
我们即将抵达,山谷里的欢乐声音
已经传到蓝色的天空,爱人的舞姿
使绵延的溪流水花飞溅
诗极富乐感,唯美,白银时代的踪迹,略显冗长
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白水
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PostPosted: 2006-11-26 19:01:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

温馨, 唯美. 喜欢
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遛达的七七
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Joined: 07 Jun 2006
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PostPosted: 2006-11-26 22:36:36    Post subject: 迪拜哦~ Reply with quote

喜爱这个
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维鹿延
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PostPosted: 2006-11-28 03:24:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

童话意境,唯美情牵。
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迪拜
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PostPosted: 2006-11-28 16:59:35    Post subject: 拜读各位点评 Reply with quote

谢谢和平岛,左岸先生

谢谢月光,维鹿延先生

谢谢七七的点评.
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左岸
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PostPosted: 2006-11-29 18:45:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

再读:,从语言开始,让我们记住,让我们回首,是诗歌提升了血流的速度。
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