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＜燃，或碎＞
半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 06:59:09    Post subject: ＜燃，或碎＞ Reply with quote
＜燃，或碎＞


我的生命是一页薄纸
用木炭画字，字里有火

如果你也是火
请点燃我吧
让我燃烧

死在炽热里，你的怀里
碎成千万张轻盈的灰蝶
如果蝶舞，风知道：

天空是怎样惊愕
她的颤栗　和　喜悦

Very Happy 碎得有点过分了，千万别吓着大家～
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 07:00:46    Post subject: Reply with quote
恩，这是回帖，怎么成主帖了
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 14:59:20    Post subject: Reply with quote
我的生命是一页薄纸
用木炭画字，字里有火

呵呵 胆子不小。 Laughing
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William Zhou周道模
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 15:14:05    Post subject: Reply with quote
诗人就是“情烈”，请问你那个“你”有胆量点燃森林大火吗？
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 16:33:41    Post subject: Reply with quote
淡水 wrote:
我的生命是一页薄纸
用木炭画字，字里有火

呵呵 胆子不小。 Laughing


呵呵，胆子其实挺小~
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 16:35:25    Post subject: Reply with quote
William Zhou周道模 wrote:
诗人就是“情烈”，请问你那个“你”有胆量点燃森林大火吗？


呵呵，也就是找个假象敌，发泄一下~
真要点燃，我不活了？：）
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 19:02:39    Post subject: Reply with quote
喜欢，问好
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吉祥女巫
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PostPosted: 2007-11-13 17:30:43    Post subject: Reply with quote
如果你也是火
请点燃我吧
让我燃烧

喜欢这样的句子 欣赏了
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