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七律叹林妹妹——陈晓旭

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Posted: 2007-10-07 11:33:03 Post subject: 七律叹林妹妹——陈晓旭

七律叹林妹妹——陈晓旭 ——司马策风闻道花归春尽时，横添柳絮泪飞急。化身入黛庄子梦，回首惊曹万众迷。萍聚红楼腾紫雾，体缠黑气避佛祠。空回旧燕寻鸿影，啼唤阴阳两不知。 07。5，23 温哥华 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

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Posted: 2007-10-07 16:29:25 Post subject:

叹林妹妹情真意切，闻道、横添过渡自然，欣赏~

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Posted: 2007-10-08 22:56:43 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

叹林妹妹情真意切，闻道、横添过渡自然，欣赏~

感谢晓松关注喜欢。握了！
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莹雪
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Posted: 2007-10-08 23:22:52 Post subject:

赏读，问好司马兄！

冰清
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Posted: 2007-10-09 10:47:44 Post subject:

空回旧燕寻鸿影，啼唤阴阳两不知。缅怀情深悲切切!

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Posted: 2007-10-15 19:28:57 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

赏读，问好司马兄！

感谢莹雪光临阅评。握个！
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Posted: 2007-11-23 22:13:33 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

空回旧燕寻鸿影，
啼唤阴阳两不知。

缅怀情深悲切切!

多谢冰清大姐欣赏感怀共鸣!

良好问候!
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Posted: 2008-06-13 17:27:44 Post subject:

空回旧燕寻鸿影， l 啼唤阴阳两不知。

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Posted: 2008-06-17 21:59:36 Post subject:

赵福治 wrote:

空回旧燕寻鸿影， l
啼唤阴阳两不知。

多谢赵兄到此关注点评!
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