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睡吧，一块青春的石头

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hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-10-06 02:04:33 Post subject:

黑与白 1）我们开始挖掘彼此的坟墓在挖通之前我们的世界是黑暗的我们用漆黑的眼睛装饰出一个明亮的世界 2）是谁用闪电击中了我漆黑之夜让我像那风一样自由吧像暴雨一样从闪电中走来 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

jemmy
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Posted: 2007-10-06 03:29:51 Post subject:

第一首,我觉得还是保留原来的吧,直到有天,突然灵感来了,再改不迟喜欢第二首,不过,岛爷觉得自己不自由吗? _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/sowhy

白水
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Posted: 2007-10-06 06:23:27 Post subject:

在古墓里闭关数月, 出来放风了? 看来只是随便活动活动, 写的太草了. 泼点凉水.得罪了. 开溜

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