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PostPosted: 2007-10-05 20:10:27    Post subject: 有一种爱叫逃离 Reply with quote

1.

黑夜因为心痛而撕裂
宇宙的灯光里
我看到一个荒凉的影子
  正在急速
      缩
       小
到不能再卑微的小

是什么这般匆匆
从博客的夹缝里
       逃逸!

还有什么可以呼吸吗?
这空茫茫的世界
连空气都被抽干了——
苹果被爱情抽干了
爱情被苦涩抽干了
苦涩被寂寞抽干了,哦
我需要呼吸!

那个插满毒刺的乳头
滴落的
   是谁的鲜血
       如此之惊艳?
你为何忧伤
我认识你吗?
我又为何
    如此之忧伤!

所有城堡里的人
都选择了
    逃离
你又为何
    独自坚持

抓,只剩下了
      一把
      灰凉凉的
      骨头

哦,连高挑的岛屿
都不再抵抗
  沉没的命运,
       沉没,沉没吧!

         的界世这
       日末
   自独何为
 择选

住?你!


2.

只有大山才能挺得住!

岁月把巨石碾成了
泥沙
泥沙压弯了所有
  倒栽的骨头
  男人的骨头
是天底下的最软肋

男人就没有骨头呀
你快逃吧
做一个勇敢的逃兵!

你看
  那只麻雀
  连逃跑的姿势
  都那么优雅

充满了什么样的气质
才能逃得
   如此之优雅

你说
   天之尤物
你是
   彼岸之花
是花
   就要凋零

葬花吟此起彼伏
星星是
   荧火虫一样
   彼伏此起的尘埃

   天际
     因接纳了你
     而不再荒凉
银河是河吗
为何连水声
都如此寂寞
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PostPosted: 2007-10-05 20:21:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

激情撕裂胸膛。好诗兴呵岛住!
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PostPosted: 2007-10-05 21:18:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

银河是河吗
为何连水声
都如此寂寞

岛在逃什么? Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-10-05 22:49:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

@-@
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PostPosted: 2007-10-05 22:51:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

jemmy wrote:
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你的眼镜不错呀
金丝雀的
Cool
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PostPosted: 2007-10-05 23:02:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

岛爷,你不要笑话我了
眼镜差点没关系,看得清楚就行
你那位,没被你吓着?
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PostPosted: 2007-10-05 23:10:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

写诗歌就是写吧

金丝雀突然放出来
有点晕吧
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PostPosted: 2007-10-05 23:41:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

象你这种性格,写出这样的诗来,不曾料想
对,写诗也就是写吧
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PostPosted: 2007-10-05 23:49:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

jemmy wrote:
象你这种性格,写出这样的诗来,不曾料想
对,写诗也就是写吧


我应该是什么样的性格呢
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PostPosted: 2007-10-05 23:57:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

不清楚
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PostPosted: 2007-10-06 00:35:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
jemmy wrote:
@-@


你的眼镜不错呀
金丝雀的
Cool


笑笑笑。。。
没戴过眼睛,没资格评论。去年在温哥华时特地跑去metrotown眼睛店看了几次,试戴好几百次,想装有学问。。。没福啊,戴上就眼晕。 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2007-10-06 00:40:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

我平时不戴眼镜,除了上网
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PostPosted: 2007-10-06 00:56:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

回头看了岛爷的另一首诗,什么她有一头长发吧的,总算明白岛爷为什么突然热情澎湃,原来是为刘安安呐
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PostPosted: 2007-10-06 01:20:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

jemmy wrote:
回头看了岛爷的另一首诗,什么她有一头长发吧的,总算明白岛爷为什么突然热情澎湃,原来是为刘安安呐


感觉很感慨
和遗憾
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PostPosted: 2007-10-06 02:37:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

哈哈,我不喜欢这拐弯的诗歌。
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PostPosted: 2007-10-06 06:34:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
jemmy wrote:
回头看了岛爷的另一首诗,什么她有一头长发吧的,总算明白岛爷为什么突然热情澎湃,原来是为刘安安呐


感觉很感慨
和遗憾


别说, 这首写的还真感人.
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PostPosted: 2007-10-07 10:13:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

深情的歇斯底里。幽雅的颓废。

痛苦的幸福。死亡的再生。
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PostPosted: 2007-10-08 19:19:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好
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PostPosted: 2007-10-21 20:11:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

很新奇的格式~~~~~~~~~~
学习了!




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PostPosted: 2007-10-22 04:18:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

再来看看,还是很喜欢
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