许蔚
童生
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 Posted: 2007-10-04 00:16:47 Post subject: 长啸又一暮 |
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长啸又一暮
许蔚
千里遥醉
梦晓
寄荷田
但滴落
泪如许
已是昨日豪饮
借残月
照空壶
长啸又一暮
2007.10.4
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半溪明月
榜眼
Joined: 30 Sep 2006
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| Posted: 2007-10-04 00:47:53 Post subject: |
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| 是首词？欣赏了 |
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kokho
进士出身
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Location: Singapore
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| Posted: 2007-10-04 21:40:11 Post subject: |
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已是昨日豪饮
借残月
照空壶
长啸又一暮
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许蔚
童生
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| Posted: 2007-10-04 23:57:51 Post subject: |
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| 大概原本想写成词的形式，后来懒得按牌索韵，就做成这样了，呵呵，懒人的办法 |
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许蔚
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| Posted: 2007-10-04 23:59:19 Post subject: |
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| 个人也比较喜欢后面四句，本来还考虑拿出来，闹闹独立呢，呵呵 |
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kokho
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| Posted: 2007-10-05 00:54:57 Post subject: |
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朋友 既然来了，多给其他的诗友 回回贴 ：）
老是让我们几个人 给你们回帖 不够热闹巴 ？？？
 
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许蔚
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| Posted: 2007-10-08 00:13:29 Post subject: |
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| 什么是佛祖西来意，朗月当空 |
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