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瞎子阿炳和那轮月

齐遂林
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Posted: 2006-11-24 20:03:15 Post subject: 瞎子阿炳和那轮月

阿炳没有看见过那轮月是月光追着阿炳把满身灿烂洒在他经过的胡同洒在他一失足就能掉进的湖水阿炳感觉不到月的疼痛感觉不到自己是那个秋天唯一幸福的人阿炳把二胡挂在月亮上挖了一个墓穴用蒿草盖住自己的破衣烂衫默默走向世界深处直到今天那轮月还痴痴地等在湖边 2006年11月25日

和平岛
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Posted: 2006-11-24 20:10:46 Post subject:

那轮月还痴痴地等在湖边觉得结尾有新意 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

齐遂林
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Posted: 2006-11-25 20:03:11 Post subject:

[quote="和平岛"]那轮月还痴痴地等在湖边觉得结尾有新意 [/quote] 谢和平岛评点

左岸
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Posted: 2006-12-04 04:45:55 Post subject:

阿炳把二胡挂在月亮上挖了一个墓穴用蒿草盖住自己的破衣烂衫默默走向世界深处直到今天那轮月还痴痴地等在湖边语言与想象是诗的双翼 _________________ 黑暗怎样焊住灵魂的银河

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