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一言
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PostPosted: 2007-10-01 23:19:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

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从一个页面到另一个页面
眼睛刺疼,和疲劳无关
管不住的手指
犯罪

转身,回头,转身......
我在原地
动作缓慢,骨头有伤  

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寂寞的女子,在铜镜里
读月亮。脸上的字
多意。一段一段
被场景和时间
雕蚀,模糊不清

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“一人只下,万人之上”
在诗歌的国度
我既是皇后,也是皇上
这话,你教的

你别讨厌我哦,因为我动了你的心弦。
你可以借鉴偶得意见,其实表达的意思一样,但欣赏时的感觉就有些不同,不过只是一点点,希见谅。
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我是个平凡的人,但我喜欢在平凡的日子里做不平凡的事情,每个人都可以这么来作去认为自己的存在。
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一言
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PostPosted: 2007-10-01 23:26:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

那么多人给你回帖子,怪不得你说你是皇后也是皇上,我看你还是个天使呢,你怎么不祝福我这个寂寞的人国庆节呢?啥人呀。
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PostPosted: 2007-10-02 00:09:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

一言 wrote:
试问小女子可否婚嫁


明月答:一言。。。难尽。
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PostPosted: 2007-10-02 04:54:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵,问一言国庆节好!也问NOBODY国庆节好~
NOBODY也替我回答了,呵呵,回答的不错~
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William Zhou周道模
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PostPosted: 2007-10-03 17:21:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

我原已说了一段话,不知未发出还是被人删了。明月有“明亮”的胸臆理解我的话语,定能读到你未来的好诗!
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PostPosted: 2007-10-03 22:15:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

William Zhou周道模 wrote:
我原已说了一段话,不知未发出还是被人删了。明月有“明亮”的胸臆理解我的话语,定能读到你未来的好诗!


感谢周老师的鼓励很关注,明月记下了~握!
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PostPosted: 2007-10-03 23:16:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

感觉痕迹很重哦!!又是寂寞女子!!呵呵呵呵
握个手,不再寂寞!!
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PostPosted: 2007-10-04 01:22:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

子花 wrote:
感觉痕迹很重哦!!又是寂寞女子!!呵呵呵呵
握个手,不再寂寞!!


呵呵,握着小兄弟的手,更感寂寞~
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