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◎很早,很早
千里
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PostPosted: 2007-10-03 19:13:08    Post subject: ◎很早,很早 Reply with quote

◎很早,很早

中秋过后
我说,回来看你——
很早就说了。

  早于某一夜
 早于某一天
甚至,早于某一个黄昏


而,早餐——
培根,蛋
躺在白色的瓷盘上

雨,一阵阵下得很大
天空的背景音乐
为什么 ? 那么纯
像,初始

 我说,回来看你——很早,很早
很早就说了
2007.10.04


◎刚刚,飘了些雨

一阵雨
像轻纱在窗外飘了

忽又停了,像似
不曾来过

窗知道
我知道
有一种名叫潮湿的词语也知道
哪怕,风想扯一次

2007.09.30
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半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760

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PostPosted: 2007-10-03 21:36:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

你说,回来看我——很早,很早
很早就说了

可是我等啊等啊,黄瓜菜都凉了
也不见你来 Very Happy


窗知道
我知道
有一种名叫潮湿的词语也知道
哪怕,风想扯一次
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杨海军
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Joined: 01 Mar 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-10-03 22:12:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

很有质感的诗!有一种真情在里面。问好千里诗人!
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
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kokho
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PostPosted: 2007-10-04 21:40:58    Post subject: Reply with quote




看到节奏的魅力 :)


。。
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乒乓、摄影、诗歌
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千里
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PostPosted: 2007-10-05 04:53:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

覆明月: ( 笑 )

给海军,Kohko: 谢谢,如此细读
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