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［原创故事诗］　心环石的传奇

kokho
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Posted: 2007-09-26 12:37:49 Post subject: ［原创故事诗］　心环石的传奇

［原创故事诗］　心环石的传奇．　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　ｋｏｋｈｏ［题记］中秋　就来个月亮的故事，很少这样写的；在一次的看图题诗的论坛活动了，６个图给大家任选一个题诗，为了开玩笑．．．我把六个图串成了一个故事，也以大陆喜欢的文字形式，贴了出来　；） http://lh5.google.com/kokho88/RqkG-LwfHJI/AAAAAAAAAI8/9Y6AraCh_cw/xhs%201.JPG 非原创图片１。每个月圆的夜晚大树就展伸了我的眺望眺着村里的渔船们望着阿哥丰收的归航 http://lh3.google.com/kokho88/RqkHArwfHKI/AAAAAAAAAJE/vOm89ZsJOCY/xhs%202.jpg?imgmax=288 非原创图片２。村里的渔船们就像行过天际的云你看到渔火　就像看到星星星星就在夜空的云里　打捞着村里的的丰腴月亮也笑得　像最洁白的鱼饼 http://lh4.google.com/kokho88/RqkHC7wfHLI/AAAAAAAAAJM/i9FdJs5PgVs/xhs%203.JPG 非原创图片３。突然　从地底的最深处　　　狱的幽门把月亮　给刺伤了夜空　里的星星都躲了　起来 http://lh5.google.com/kokho88/RqkHFLwfHMI/AAAAAAAAAJU/7638-dD98E4/xhs%204.jpg?imgmax=320 非原创图片４。渔火　渔火也像星星们　在漆黑里不情愿的给躲在　海里的暗礁引诱的就不再　　抬头看月亮月亮　当受伤的月亮　　再抬起头来的时候　就只有　只有静静的暗礁悄悄的　不说　　一句话 http://lh3.google.com/kokho88/RqkHHrwfHNI/AAAAAAAAAJc/ITt_fdPEKM4/xhs%205.jpg 非原创图片５。阿哥　阿哥的鱼船　　　最不情愿就从暗礁里　站了起来站成了　　　最远也看得到的环心石碑当风吹　　　风吹来的时候。。环心　环心　就唱起了悠扬的　妹。。　妹妹。。 http://lh3.google.com/kokho88/RqkHJrwfHOI/AAAAAAAAAJk/vtxX_R_N5dQ/xhs%206.JPG 非原创图片６。眺着村里的渔船们望着阿哥丰收的归航大树展伸　不了了我的眺望　只展伸　了枯的枝　在黎明里弯曲当环心　　的悠扬　　从月圆唱成了一柄割心的刀我和　　阿哥的狗　　在朝熹里　还是什么都看不到。。 . . ［后记］原来的创作，有一首很美丽悲情的大陆清音乐，断链了；只好用了一首很抒情的歌。。祈祷The Prayer - 跨界经典夏綠蒂与Josh Gorban　。 . _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-09-26 18:48:30 Post subject:

赏心阅目！！喜欢！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-09-27 01:23:03 Post subject:

KOKHO中秋节不给我们贴出来欣赏哈~ 十五的月亮要十六圆吗?现在已经十七了!

沙漠
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Posted: 2007-09-27 04:54:35 Post subject:

串得不错！ _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

荷梦
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Posted: 2007-09-28 06:01:17 Post subject:

很美的故事诗！

Lake
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Posted: 2007-09-28 08:23:11 Post subject:

。。很好呀：） seriously... 很抒情，很动人 but, 不论怎么写，写什么，这样的文字一看上去就会被识出是 Kokho 写的，别人是写不出这个样子的有自己独特的成熟的诗风 _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

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Posted: 2007-09-28 16:43:13 Post subject:

很美....很美......很美......... _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-09-29 08:10:55 Post subject:

这么美的诗歌～～喜欢极了～～ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

白水
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Posted: 2007-09-30 21:28:54 Post subject:

唯美的KOK, 唯美的诗情画意.

kokho
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Posted: 2007-10-01 11:48:26 Post subject:

。一路给大家回好。。。　这是很早期写的　；）只能栓小学作品　。。。惭愧。。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2007-10-01 16:06:01 Post subject:

诗画音三者和睦相处，美丽动人。我们赞美，你说是“小学作品”，那我们就是“小学水平”啰！ _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

kokho
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Posted: 2007-10-02 02:00:37 Post subject:

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

诗画音三者和睦相处，美丽动人。我们赞美，你说是“小学作品”，那我们就是“小学水平”啰！

william

在洛夫先生和其他名家如梁积林等作品面前。。我不做小学生都难；）

我们和他们同一个网站，就要下决心和他们缩小差距！！！

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