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七菱八落
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PostPosted: 2007-09-28 06:12:10    Post subject: 七菱八落 Reply with quote

远离泥的旅程,湖面漂泊
七月的梦颜色偏紫
双翼藏在菱叶底,偎水蓄势

天渐高,秋水的凉不可避免
隐藏的梦 方位紊乱
八月的飞翔倒立
哦,七菱八落

你七零八落的随遇而安
壳很硬,角很尖很尖
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2007-09-28 06:19:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

生动!
想起 采红菱.
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2007-09-28 08:04:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

清灵灵的红菱,清灵灵的诗歌~
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Lake
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PostPosted: 2007-09-28 08:14:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

七菱八落

clever
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阿依琼裙
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PostPosted: 2007-09-29 08:33:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

灵动~~

生趣~~
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刘雨萍
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PostPosted: 2007-09-30 12:20:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

一池塘的菱角浮现在眼前. 生动.
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桔子
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PostPosted: 2007-09-30 14:45:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

轻盈地描绘,喜欢得紧 Smile
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-09-30 21:01:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

你七零八落的随遇而安
壳很硬,角很尖很尖

值得品味.问好
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荷梦
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PostPosted: 2007-10-01 05:28:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

韩少君 wrote:
生动!
想起 采红菱.

呵呵,看你说到采红菱,我才想起小时曾在洗衣的池塘里捞野生的菱角,小小的,嫩嫩的~~~
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荷梦
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PostPosted: 2007-10-01 05:30:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
清灵灵的红菱,清灵灵的诗歌~

明月好!这是一边吃菱角,一边挤出来的,不过,那菱角可不是红的,绿色的!呵呵!
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PostPosted: 2007-10-01 05:34:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

Lake wrote:
七菱八落

clever

谢谢鼓励!
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PostPosted: 2007-10-01 05:37:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="阿依琼裙"]灵动~~

生趣~~[/quote
我是把它当人写的,呵呵!
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PostPosted: 2007-10-01 05:41:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

刘雨萍 wrote:
一池塘的菱角浮现在眼前. 生动.

我们这里的湖里有很多很多的菱角,阴历八月以来,大街上,几乎所有的水果摊边都摆着菱角卖。可惜,我没去湖区,不曾亲见大片生长着的菱角。
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PostPosted: 2007-10-01 05:42:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

桔子 wrote:
轻盈地描绘,喜欢得紧 Smile

谢谢桔子喜欢!
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PostPosted: 2007-10-01 05:45:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
你七零八落的随遇而安
壳很硬,角很尖很尖

值得品味.问好

不得不接受,却又包裹着,防卫着~~~
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PostPosted: 2007-10-01 11:43:54    Post subject: Reply with quote



这首好 :)

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荷梦
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PostPosted: 2007-10-11 01:24:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢鼓励! Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2007-10-18 14:22:20    Post subject: Reply with quote



这首 超水准 咱!!!!!


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