荷梦 进士出身
Joined: 19 Dec 2006 Posts: 2826 Location: 湖北,黄梅 荷梦Collection |
Posted: 2007-09-28 06:12:10 Post subject: 七菱八落 |
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远离泥的旅程,湖面漂泊
七月的梦颜色偏紫
双翼藏在菱叶底,偎水蓄势
天渐高,秋水的凉不可避免
隐藏的梦 方位紊乱
八月的飞翔倒立
哦,七菱八落
你七零八落的随遇而安
壳很硬,角很尖很尖 |
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韩少君 进士出身

Joined: 06 Apr 2007 Posts: 2558 Location: 吉林四平 韩少君Collection |
Posted: 2007-09-28 06:19:40 Post subject: |
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生动!
想起 采红菱. _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345 |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
半溪明月Collection |
Posted: 2007-09-28 08:04:09 Post subject: |
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清灵灵的红菱,清灵灵的诗歌~ |
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Lake 举人

Joined: 09 Jan 2007 Posts: 1286
LakeCollection |
Posted: 2007-09-28 08:14:31 Post subject: |
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七菱八落
clever _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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阿依琼裙 秀才

Joined: 09 Apr 2007 Posts: 920 Location: 废墟之上 阿依琼裙Collection |
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刘雨萍 秀才
Joined: 25 Jan 2007 Posts: 226 Location: Houston, TX. U.S.A 刘雨萍Collection |
Posted: 2007-09-30 12:20:34 Post subject: |
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一池塘的菱角浮现在眼前. 生动. _________________ 隔海抒情 |
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桔子 秀才

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 214
桔子Collection |
Posted: 2007-09-30 14:45:33 Post subject: |
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轻盈地描绘,喜欢得紧  |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-09-30 21:01:57 Post subject: |
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你七零八落的随遇而安
壳很硬,角很尖很尖
值得品味.问好 |
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荷梦 进士出身
Joined: 19 Dec 2006 Posts: 2826 Location: 湖北,黄梅 荷梦Collection |
Posted: 2007-10-01 05:28:11 Post subject: |
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呵呵,看你说到采红菱,我才想起小时曾在洗衣的池塘里捞野生的菱角,小小的,嫩嫩的~~~ |
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荷梦 进士出身
Joined: 19 Dec 2006 Posts: 2826 Location: 湖北,黄梅 荷梦Collection |
Posted: 2007-10-01 05:30:18 Post subject: |
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半溪明月 wrote: |
清灵灵的红菱,清灵灵的诗歌~ |
明月好!这是一边吃菱角,一边挤出来的,不过,那菱角可不是红的,绿色的!呵呵! |
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荷梦 进士出身
Joined: 19 Dec 2006 Posts: 2826 Location: 湖北,黄梅 荷梦Collection |
Posted: 2007-10-01 05:34:14 Post subject: |
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谢谢鼓励! |
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荷梦 进士出身
Joined: 19 Dec 2006 Posts: 2826 Location: 湖北,黄梅 荷梦Collection |
Posted: 2007-10-01 05:37:08 Post subject: |
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[quote="阿依琼裙"]灵动~~
生趣~~[/quote
我是把它当人写的,呵呵! |
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荷梦 进士出身
Joined: 19 Dec 2006 Posts: 2826 Location: 湖北,黄梅 荷梦Collection |
Posted: 2007-10-01 05:41:23 Post subject: |
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刘雨萍 wrote: |
一池塘的菱角浮现在眼前. 生动. |
我们这里的湖里有很多很多的菱角,阴历八月以来,大街上,几乎所有的水果摊边都摆着菱角卖。可惜,我没去湖区,不曾亲见大片生长着的菱角。 |
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荷梦 进士出身
Joined: 19 Dec 2006 Posts: 2826 Location: 湖北,黄梅 荷梦Collection |
Posted: 2007-10-01 05:42:55 Post subject: |
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桔子 wrote: |
轻盈地描绘,喜欢得紧  |
谢谢桔子喜欢! |
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荷梦 进士出身
Joined: 19 Dec 2006 Posts: 2826 Location: 湖北,黄梅 荷梦Collection |
Posted: 2007-10-01 05:45:10 Post subject: |
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白水 Moonlight wrote: |
你七零八落的随遇而安
壳很硬,角很尖很尖
值得品味.问好 |
不得不接受,却又包裹着,防卫着~~~ |
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kokho 进士出身

Joined: 30 Nov 2006 Posts: 2642 Location: Singapore kokhoCollection |
Posted: 2007-10-01 11:43:54 Post subject: |
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这首好 :)
。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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荷梦 进士出身
Joined: 19 Dec 2006 Posts: 2826 Location: 湖北,黄梅 荷梦Collection |
Posted: 2007-10-11 01:24:40 Post subject: |
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谢谢鼓励!  |
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kokho 进士出身

Joined: 30 Nov 2006 Posts: 2642 Location: Singapore kokhoCollection |
Posted: 2007-10-18 14:22:20 Post subject: |
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这首 超水准 咱!!!!!
。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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