许蔚
童生
Joined: 07 Jan 2007
Posts: 68
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 Posted: 2007-09-28 17:50:38 Post subject: 自望迄今，连日玩月，忽风起，小窗衰飒，断绪若云，潸然颓然。 |
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自望迄今，连日玩月，忽风起，小窗衰飒，断绪若云，潸然颓然。
老荷无端空寂寞
哪得月华了相思
贞问流水何处去
影自相随复相留
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钟陵许蔚于唐镇 |
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晓松
举人
Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Posts: 1192
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| Posted: 2007-09-29 20:12:17 Post subject: |
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| 拜读。欣赏诗的意境，要是能押韵就更好了~ |
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许蔚
童生
Joined: 07 Jan 2007
Posts: 68
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| Posted: 2007-10-04 00:09:56 Post subject: |
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嗯，这方面需要琢磨
只是做的时候偷懒，只照顾感觉而没考虑形式了，呵呵 |
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南北客
童生
Joined: 20 Jun 2007
Posts: 22
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| Posted: 2007-10-04 09:22:45 Post subject: |
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| 喜欢前两句。 |
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许蔚
童生
Joined: 07 Jan 2007
Posts: 68
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| Posted: 2007-10-05 00:01:05 Post subject: |
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| 呵呵，个人比较喜欢后两句 |
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敦智
童生
Joined: 18 Jun 2007
Posts: 40
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| Posted: 2007-10-05 07:53:02 Post subject: |
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老荷无端空寂寞
哪得月华了相思
好句。欣赏。 |
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