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PostPosted: 2007-09-24 20:18:06    Post subject: 祝古韵新音各位老师和朋友们中秋佳节快乐 Reply with quote

但愿人长久, 千里共婵娟

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PostPosted: 2007-09-24 20:28:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

大家也祝白水和和美美,中秋更美,诸事遂意!
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PostPosted: 2007-09-24 20:33:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

晓松, 明晚几诗歌爱好者拟去湖边赏月. 你若能同去请给我电话.
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PostPosted: 2007-09-24 21:58:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水,问好!祝中秋快乐!
即兴一首<双红豆>,请多指导!

..... 即 兴.....
<调寄双红豆>

月 也 圆 ,
梦 也 圆 ,
梦 想 成 真 结 善 缘 ,
家 家 佳 节 欢 .

丰 收 年 ,
快 乐 年 ,
国 泰 民 安 福 寿 绵 ,
天 天 展 笑 颜 .
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PostPosted: 2007-09-25 04:19:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

白云闲人 wrote:
白水,问好!祝中秋快乐!
即兴一首<双红豆>,请多指导!

..... 即 兴.....
<调寄双红豆>

月 也 圆 ,
梦 也 圆 ,
梦 想 成 真 结 善 缘 ,
家 家 佳 节 欢 .

丰 收 年 ,
快 乐 年 ,
国 泰 民 安 福 寿 绵 ,
天 天 展 笑 颜 .


谢谢白云老师, 让我们共祝天下的文人墨客阖家团圆. 佳作多多.
借花献佛 Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-09-25 12:25:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰轮碧宇夜清凉

唤友呼朋酒满觞

一腹诗情谁不让

湖边正好赏清光
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PostPosted: 2007-09-25 15:17:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

湖边正好赏清光
孤影寒宫舞霓裳
寂寞婵娟应妒我
天河岂止逐牛郎
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PostPosted: 2007-09-25 15:21:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

那株樹有特色,頗像個動了情的詩人。 Surprised
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PostPosted: 2007-09-25 18:07:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

惜乎!多伦多今夜无月可赏,还是看白水提供的图片好,一轮明月当空,

一碧如洗,让人神清气爽,净虑舒心,谢谢白水。
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PostPosted: 2007-09-25 18:18:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

湖边赏月多古意,只怕感冒流鼻涕
啊杰一声嫦娥惊,落在湖中娇滴滴
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PostPosted: 2007-09-25 20:33:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄老师, 野航.我们刚赏月回来. 夜色中的安大略湖美极了. 水天一色. 时而游云托月, 时尔浓云密布, 时尔皓月当空, 最棒的是近处的月和远方的闪电同是出现在湖面上, 有如游龙戏珠. 我们在沙滩摆地席, 果汁当酒, 把酒邀月, 过了一把李白的瘾. 喝醉了就光脚丫到湖水里走一圈, 来段现代人的潇洒. 大家还直后悔没带游泳衣. 谁信啊, 9月末了, 今天TORONTO的温度达31度.

最可笑是查里的开场打油诗, 整个一油郎, 哪叫诗歌啊(要知道, 他虽不上网, 却是饱读经书之人, 张嘴就喷诗歌的)那时正好云遮月, 人家就来了:
滩前无月光
两眼泪汪汪
身边没老婆(这婆也不是仄声啊, 改老伴, 想想不对, 叫老了 )
还得回故乡
这下好, 把我们的雅性全笑没了. 索性, 这帮宝贝开唱. 别说, 那嗓子还真和歌星们有一拼. 楞把那婵娟给唱出来了. 待我们要离开时, 她竟然依依不舍落起泪(雨)来. 我们一路说笑着回来, 我先生光着脚丫开车送秋叶他们去他们的停车场, 感觉不对, 楞把车开到逆行线上. 晕死 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-09-26 08:12:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

这个月亮是真的

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PostPosted: 2007-09-26 12:16:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

湖边邀月,引项高歌,好浪漫,好情怀,未能同乐,实感遗憾.

让查里梦里返故乡好了,也算一点安慰.

如此浪漫之夜,不有佳作,何伸雅怀?
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PostPosted: 2007-09-27 10:48:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水兄,好兴致,您应该写一散文详述当晚情景况。


黄洋界老师,我这不是佳作,临屏草上,抛砖引玉,请各位斧正:


七律-安湖赏月

平湖秋月映相晖,万里长天云卷帏。
果汁为酬抒冷暖,银盘作镜照依稀。
远空闪电游龙过,近岸快门留影归。
回响高歌动素意,人间俯视泪纷飞。


人间俯视泪纷飞--问白水兄就知道是什么一回事了 Laughing Laughing Laughing
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PostPosted: 2007-09-27 12:45:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋叶的彩笔编织了一曲平湖秋月的新乐章! 好!
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PostPosted: 2007-09-27 13:16:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

闪电同暗月相映,高歌与热泪齐飞,没有亲历其景,

难有如此感受。秋叶好主意,让散文与诗韵双辉,加油!
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PostPosted: 2007-09-27 15:39:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水兄,帖子多发了,大有逼人之势,请您帮忙删去两条。谢谢!
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PostPosted: 2007-09-27 21:30:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋叶 wrote:
白水兄,好兴致,您应该写一散文详述当晚情景况。


黄洋界老师,我这不是佳作,临屏草上,抛砖引玉,请各位斧正:


七律-安湖赏月

平湖秋月映相晖,万里长天云卷帏。
果汁为酬抒冷暖,银盘作镜照依稀。
远空闪电如龙过,近岸快门留影归。
回响高歌动素意,人间盼视泪纷飞。


人间盼视泪纷飞--问白水兄就知道是什么一回事了 Laughing Laughing Laughing


秋香MM, 怎么专捡水兄最忙的时候回来? Twisted Evil
诗到是不错. 难怪唐兄专点秋香呢 Very Happy
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黄洋界 wrote:
白水兄,帖子多发了,大有逼人之势,请您帮忙删去两条。谢谢!


黄老师, 没觉得多啊.
哦, 忘记告诉你, 那坏查理没把扇子带给我. 气死我. 大家也是下了班才聚会, 也许他忙忘了.这两天我太忙还没顾上给他电话问他要呢. 明天催他一次, 要罚Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-09-28 05:53:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

半卷幽波半卷晖,一方天地作轩帏。烟熏火燎鱼须熟,杯倒瓶歪酒太稀。
不信瑶台衔梦去,犹将蓑雨送魂归。秋分欲数嫦娥泪,故把相思弩沫飞。

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