淡水
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Joined: 06 Jul 2007
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 Posted: 2007-09-26 05:21:29 Post subject: 岁月 |
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一位老人在月色里
朝我走来，背有些驼
我躲过他的目光
俯望体内
倾听早晨的马蹄声
2007，9，25 |
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子花
秀才
Joined: 08 Mar 2007
Posts: 722
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| Posted: 2007-09-26 05:42:59 Post subject: |
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| 沙发～～～～～～～ |
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阿依琼裙
秀才
Joined: 09 Apr 2007
Posts: 920
Location: 废墟之上
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杨海军
进士出身
Joined: 01 Mar 2007
Posts: 2205
Location: 吉林
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| Posted: 2007-09-26 19:00:08 Post subject: |
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一位老人在月色里
朝我走来，背有些驼
我躲过他的目光
俯望体内
倾听早晨的马蹄声
好！！！意蕴！
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
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淡水
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Posts: 82
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| Posted: 2007-09-27 05:06:40 Post subject: |
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谢谢关注，下次给你专门留一个。  |
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淡水
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Posts: 82
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| Posted: 2007-09-27 05:07:12 Post subject: |
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多谢阿依琼裙点评。问好。 |
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淡水
童生
Joined: 06 Jul 2007
Posts: 82
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| Posted: 2007-09-27 05:07:37 Post subject: |
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| 杨海军 wrote: |
一位老人在月色里
朝我走来，背有些驼
我躲过他的目光
俯望体内
倾听早晨的马蹄声
好！！！意蕴！ |
多谢海军。远握。 |
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