胡有琪
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 Posted: 2007-09-25 19:53:13 Post subject: 中秋月 |
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中秋月
明镜高悬
人们看到许多衣冠不整的心事
蜂拥而出 赤裸裸的跳舞
泪
悄悄润湿了海的眼眶
思念 开始暴动
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沙漠
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Location: 中国温州
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| Posted: 2007-09-25 23:29:42 Post subject: |
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不错，但“明镜高悬”这个意象有点老。
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子花
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| Posted: 2007-09-26 04:45:50 Post subject: |
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| 学习学习～～～～～～～～ |
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kokho
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| Posted: 2007-09-26 12:28:03 Post subject: |
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很精短 ：） 拜读 。。
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[ 朋友， 也来回回其他朋友的贴 ]
€
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杨海军
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