秘密的名字（双语） 黄娟

[jemmy]

秘密的名字（双语）
黄娟
给你一个秘密的名字
这名字甚至对你也是秘密

从此梦想象夜一样广漠而遥远
从此日记里悄悄地夹满调皮的诗行
从此随时打开窗扇
就会看到斑斓的蝴蝶
飞翔在心的花园

从此星星仿佛可以会意
轻轻的风含着笑语
从此对你仿佛有一千种权利
想到你
春天的阳光遍地

给你一个秘密的名字
这使人感到窃窃的有趣
而且快意

A Secret Name
by huangjuan
Give you a secret name
The name even a secret for you

From then on dream vast and bare and far like night
From then on naughty poem's sentences interspersed with diarry full
in the quiet
From then on open the window at any time
You would see the bright coloured butterflys
Flying in the garden of heart

From then on stars seem know me
Slight wind smill and talk in a whisper
From then on seem I have a thousand rights from you
When I miss you
I feel the sunshine of spring everywhere

Give you a secret name
It let me fun secretly
And pleasant sensation
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[kokho]

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recital poem

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乒乓、摄影、诗歌

[William Zhou周道模]

从此: from now on ?
第二段: you or I ?
butterflys --- butterflies ? smill --- smile ?
Can whisper be used as a noun ?
rights from you ---- rights to you ? seem I have ---- seem I to have?
let me fun --- let me have fun ?
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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
周道模

[jemmy]

A Secret Name
by huangjuan
Give you a secret name
The name even a secret for you

From then on dream vast and bare and far like night
From then on naughty poem's sentences interspersed with diarry full
in the quiet
From then on open the window at any time
You would see the bright coloured butterflies
Flying in the garden of heart

From then on stars seem know me
Slight wind smile and talk in a whisper
From then on seem I have a thousand rights from you
When I miss you
I feel the sunshine of spring everywhere

Give you a secret name
It let me have fun secretly
And pleasant sensation


.谢周生, rights to you ? seem I have ---- seem I to have? 这两句我还得看看
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[jemmy]

whisper 也可作名词
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